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SerenaFehr
2004-03-23 . chapter 11
Oh no, not Bubo! And he's Taylor's father besides. How terribly sad. I can understand Taylor's anger at Frank. But, where did she drop that card? Could it have fallen into her own stuff? Dare we hope for a sequel? Great story, Dreamy!
SerenaFehr
2004-03-23 . chapter 10
WOW! What a place to leave us hanging! Such incredible tension. Well done.
SerenaFehr
2004-03-23 . chapter 9
I keep getting a nagging feeling that no matter what Frank/Ettore does now, he'll be in big trouble.
Ardeth S.
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
Sheeyet! Bubo was Taylor's father! Now THAT threw me for a loop! Very icy exterior she has toward Donovan. He truly messed up and hurt her badly.
Cindy
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
I love this story and I felt so bad for Taylor that she lost her father and so bad for her and Frank. But I can't believe you left it like that will there be a sequel. I loved the story you did a great job on it.
Julianna
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
Oh no! You did not just leave it that way! PLEASE tell me that there will be a sequel! Yet another great story Shel!!
MeTuKa
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
Wow! I've been playing catch up on the last couple of chapters. Amazing story, hon. Another great one. Poor Taylor, she lost so much.
Nicky
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
No!! You can end the story like that!! This is a very realistic ending, but where's the happily ever after?!
Will there be a sequel in the future? Or is the end for Frank and Taylor?!
Dawn369
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
Oh my gosh, what an ending. That was a shocker. Bubo being her father through me for a bit, but it made perfect sense. What a sad ending and Taylor and Donovan are finished. I got all misty eyed. Wonderful storyline hon.
Khalessa
2004-03-17 . chapter 11
Damn what a fine read, and the ending so full of sadness...I loved it. Cant wait for your next story
Ardeth S.
2004-03-16 . chapter 10
Awhg! Why did you go and leave it there? Cliffhanger cliffhanger oh no a cliffhanger.
Nicky
2004-03-16 . chapter 10
Oh, no! What happened?!?! He couldn't have shot Taylor. Please post the next chapter!! I need to know what happened.
J-James
2004-03-16 . chapter 10
Ack! Who shot who!? You can't leave it like that! And here Frank thought he had done everything he could to keep Taylor safe!
Khalessa
2004-03-16 . chapter 10
WTG girl, a very good, suspenseful ending...more please, and soon...
Dawn369
2004-03-16 . chapter 10
Ack, Yikes, you left it there. No. Oh gosh woman, you better put up the next chapter in a hurry. I am dying to find out what happened. Yep, I can see that Taylor was shocked at seeing Donovan. Great intense chapter and now I have to wait. I have no fingernails left.
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