 Flocculate 2009-10-28 . chapter 18You have no idea how annoying it is to become engrosed in this story and then find it incomplete! For reasons I can't explain, I was under the distinct impression that it was finished. Nonetheless this was a fabulous read, and however remote it may be, I look forward to the next update. |
 xXneonXaddictXx 2009-10-24 . chapter 18Seriously?! You can't just stop there and not update for four years! It was just starting to get good!
I love your characterization, the characters are spot on, while still showing that they've grown from the ones we knew in canon. And they continue to grow.
And you have quite a delicious plot, and it's awful (and I only say awful because I'm dying to know what the heck's going on!) the way you're just letting little bits slip here and there about what's going on with Voldy, and the way you're addressing the past, only showing us a bit at a time, leaving us to guess until we get more clues.
It's rather quite irritating, and not just because I want to know, but because they're is nothing further of the story posted!
And I really, really, REALLY want to see some Snape/Harry action, the way you've nailed the characters has made it interesting to see how that's going to work out. Like I said, it was just getting good!
I really hope that you've not abandoned the story and are just biding your time, waiting to come back with a bang. Sorta like Voldy in GoF. But much, much cooler. |
 Fick Chick 2009-08-20 . chapter 18This is really well written. It's too bad that it appears to have been abandoned. |
 beauty0102 2009-08-13 . chapter 18this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.
yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so. |
 shs 2009-07-13 . chapter 18 NO! DONT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! YOU CANT! merlin, please update!i love this story, so many intricacies, and mystery, and its SO well written! i have trouble finding stories like this, please! what happens next?! what happens wiht voldy shorts? |
 Willa1317 2009-07-02 . chapter 18DRAT!! Drat it all! Severus was finally realizing who Harry really was!! Arg! is there any hope of continuance? |
 jen3572005 2009-04-27 . chapter 18wow i love this story its so detailed and I reeally needed to read carefully to keep up. great job. i just found this a few days ago and couldnt stop myself from reading. Ive noticedthough that you havent updated since 2005, have you abandoned this fic or are on a break or some thing? i hope not cos ive really enjoyed it and cant wait for more. |
 Crazy Huni 2009-04-19 . chapter 18OMG its been over 3 years since you've updated!! I really hope you haven't abandoned cause you're doing so well and sev and harry aren't together yet :( plz plz plz plz plz update
- CHxx |
 skinnyrita 2009-03-09 . chapter 1 good lord would you update this?! this has been in my faves for so long and i do love it but it really tries my patience that you're letting such a good fic languish here. |
 GreenVixen 2009-01-06 . chapter 18holy cow. this story is amazing why haven't you update in so long? get a move on girl lol! there is still so much unfinished and i cant beleive sev and harry still haven't got it on lol update son please ! |
 annonymous 2008-12-28 . chapter 18 You absolutely must continue this story, it's a real gem. You've developed the characters and plot so well. It's the most believable story I've come across. |
 carthae 2008-12-20 . chapter 18I liked the flow of it. Too bad it is abandoned, but I didn't regret reading it all the same. |
 J.S. Mews 2008-12-07 . chapter 18This is a very interesting story! I'd love for you to continue this sometime soon. Please find a way to return! |
 quaff 2008-11-05 . chapter 1 I've enjoyed this. Thanks for writing it. |
 aml10 2008-11-01 . chapter 18Amazing story, I do hope you finish it |