I LOVED THIS!!
Absolutely FAB!
Well done (:

Wow, this truly moved me. I was So close to tears. Great story and language.

sniffle... (in shock) Artemis... he died... I... well written... good concept... Artemis dead...

(snaps out of it) OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! I think I'm going to cry... It's just so good! Everyone's IC, and it's so well written! I can't believe how good this is... and anything that almost makes me cry is VERY good (considering I've never cried because of a movie or a story (besides Harry Potter 6) in my life...).

WRITE ON!

I am suddenly very glad that Spiro was gloating in the book ... :S

so miserably sad yet in a good, dramatic way! I really like that. You have written this extremely well!

oh, that was so wonderfully, horribly, terribly heartbreaking! it was amazing! you are a fabulous writer! really amazing. you have a wonderful style. I loved how you changed the ending instead of writing a totally new story. it was really good! amazing job!
*adds to favs*
--Issy

It's so sad... It almost made me cry... Spiro, that bastard, he killed Artemis! Bu...

Tragic, even more so had Butler still been alive. Good job!

NO! poor arty.

Oh my... Artemis died, It's so sad... bu this is the best death fic with Artemis that I ever read (forgive my bad English, it's not my favourite language^^") Amazing work.

OMG. I'm going to cry my eyes out...how could you? You just love to torture people, don't you?

Wow. Not many things can make me even remotly close to crying, but I was SO close to. That was amazing!

This is a good story! Maybe you should even write a sequel.

That was brilliant. I cannot fault it in any way. It made me cry. (For that matter, I am still crying)
Well done!

That was great! I loved it! I look forward to reading some of your other fics in the future- keep writing, you are really good!