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| Doghead Thirteen 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseJust checking your stuff out. This is quite nifty; if anyone deserves a Barret shot to the frontal lobe, it's Tommy the Boy. (I guess it was an explosive bullet from the way it took his head clean off) That said, you missed a slight technical detail on the Claymores; they blow quite a lot of shrapnel out the back, so you don't want to be standing too close to either side of the things when they go off, or it's time for the Chunky Salsa effect. If this gets continued, I see a very perturbed Dumbledore in the near future. Cheers, Cal. |
| TeenTypist 2004-01-31 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very good story. Will there be more chapters? |