touching story. i liked it. great job

Great story! I was hoping it would end the way it did.

Man i love u, ur such a great writer and u like all the same things as me, Star Wars, Darren Shan and Harry Potter.
This is brilliant but not entirely accurate as Obi-Wan doesn't actually become his Padawan yet, i still think itz gr8 tho!!

Hi, this a really great fic! I think you've captured the characters really well. The relationship between Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon is great and i love Saul! I'm looking forward 2 more of your work.

really like this! obi-wan is so sweet as a young'un, i want 2 hug him! really really good! luv lizzie ps i felt like bein odd n using da full name, u may hav noticed

heyhey luv da story evil ppl rock! Corse Saul got wot he deserved...i was innocent! Plz do a follow uppie! Liju had summat 2 do with this...

Just one thing 2 say...Saul!! Like it, an i don't normally read that kinda stuff. V sweet ending btw. Catcha l8erz.