aw! so sweet!
*rubs eyes*
can't believe i finished this in one day. it is summer, though, so...

Aw... Bakura in the child saga sounds so kawai! To bad what happens next, though... But this is the bestest story I've read yet! Oh, and how the HELL does Ryou know swears, much less is comfortable by them? All in all, this is a well constructed fanfic! Ja ne!

Oh my goodness...That was so sweet! I absolutely loved your story. It almost made me want to cry at some parts. You really captured the emotion and set Ryou and Bakura up so perfectly...Thank you for finishing it...It was wonderful...Thank you again. I just wanted to let you know how much I loved it...It was really great. Keep writing, your on My favorite Authors list...Thanks again.
-Youshiie

Zakkenayo, Hontou, Ikisho….these are all words I did not know. Um I was kinda worried about the expo thing with the fight, even through the art of AU you can’t play Pegasus as not having the Eye, he got it at the same time that he found out about the game….or am I not s’posed to complain? Though eh, um at the age Kaiba was when he and his brother were at the expo thing he would have been under the tyranny of his adopted father or even at that age, still with his parents….. I’m trying to be impartial but I think I may just be putting to much pressure on you being able to write, for all I know this could be your first fic of this type…and even then maybe I shouldn’t nitpick….after all I did no better and /both/ of my pieces put together couldn’t even add up to your shortest chapter…. And sorry for still not being able to finish the story so far…I am trying

Hello, sorry for not submitting an individual review for each chapter but I really think that it is not that bad as long as I review for all that I have read. Um, firstly you only mentioned American cartoons when you were listing his favorite ones( not to say much but I believe he had spent his youth in his native country until his mother died so would be listing British ‘toons, or at least I think that is correct) um also Bakura would not know that he was trapped in the ring for a long time, only that he was trapped….heh, but now that I’m on a roll with the bad stuff um, the ‘pink/blue’ thing was European in origin and was done about two or three hundred or so years ago when ‘blue boy’ was painted, it was a reaction to that and the picture ‘pink girl’ by a totally different person that led to the general census of color-coding children in this last century. Also to clear things up a bit, sensei told us that normal people don’t really do marijuana , that is something practiced by the yakuza and I don’t really see Ryou as a Japanese mafia brat. But that really isn’t all bad, it isn’t like I could have done to much better myself…um wow this is kinda getting negative but, Bakura wouldn’t know any of the dances he did in when he met Ryou’s mother(is it ok that I write this? It was confusing..) though not everything is bad, a funny thing is that in chapter five right as Bakura was talking about them being one and then saying it was not a love proclamation my playlist started playing ‘dirty little secret’…that was almost to perfect. Andwhen you made a typo in the next chapter it made me smile: “I mentally nodded, and put a simple ‘Beaver Worrier’ into the play in attack-mode, face-up”…..that was beautiful~ but really it’s ‘Beaver Warrior’ though it still makes me laugh, on a sadder note I feel sympathy for you you prolly loved your mother very much, luckily I did not have that problem as a child, my mother simply did not want me so I don’t know how it would feel to lose my mother(btw I was seven) though I do understand the pain of loss. Um though on a lighter note I learned something new: Shimpai janai….that was something I didn’t know. Also what is your native language? It isn’t English is it…..oh, and sorry for only reading up to the end of chapter 9 I’ll finish tomorrow, though I also have filming and a deviantart feature to do so I don’t know if I’ll be able to write anything.

OMGAWSH, i thought i wouldn't ever beable to read this again because, well...i lost internet..then my account in hotmail was dissabled so i didn't get any alerts...but your story is tres magnifique!!

Sweet chapter, you can speck french yay you said that right woopee, Bakura and Ryou are sweet together to awasome chappy

Very nice! I loved this story! Sorry, I moved house, so we didn't have internet, so I've been away for a while. We had to move to a whole different country! And now I'm back! YAY!

Yay! lovely story!

ooh, i really love this story!! I love Ryou and Bakura, I also watched dragonballz since i was like 6 and everyone thought it was werid coz i was a girl. BUt i call that sexist keep up the good work

shadow's gal

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*sigh* And so ends my very first favourite fic on this site... *sniff* It seems like so long ago when I first clicked it onto my favourite's list. My favourite parts would have to be in the end with Ryou being wanted by so many countries, and his father's reaction to the fact that he's gay... so sweet! ^__^ And they finally got together! A happy ending! *salutes* It was a great story.

-stops looking for button- The slap saved Bakura? ...yes well...I was gonna do that next. u.u
Aw. The tendershippy yumminess. ^_^ Makes me happy. And the ending was adorable. -fangirlish squeal- Seriously, I love this story. Your writing is amazing, and your dedication...-looks at the two years it took to write this- is inspiring.
I LOVE this story! =D

Why did you have to leave there? I would have LOVED to see how his father reacts! But besides that, I enjoyed the ending. In fact, I enjoyed the whole story! Great job!

Wow! Beautiful! Bakura lived! :D I'm so happy for everyone in the story. Exept maybe Jounochi. Heh.

I had a feeling that there was meaning in the slap.

Heh. The look on Ryou's father's face in my mind.

You did a beautiful job writing this story!

This is very interesting. I will try to catch up with it.