Definitely dredges up dark thoughts in the reader. Makes it a bit hard to review objectively. Insightful.

Very good. Brought tears to my eyes.

I'm sorry you seem to have stopped writing. I would love to read more of your version of the story(ies), of Harry and Luna, and Neville (and Hermione?)

But thanks for what you did write. Very nice.

Tom A.

That was so sad. I feel really bad for Neville.

All i can say is wow, it was really powerful, nearly made me cry in parts, really well written.

this was very good. powerful I almost cried with neville. keep writing.

that was so sad! i was crying by the end of the story. it's really good. i hope you post more stories.

awesome you should write more

That was a really nice story. I like your insight into Neville's feelings, he's an interesting charater, and I liked the ending, his Mothers kiss. You have a nice style and interesting idea's I hope you write more soon!

The bit at the end with Alice...
perfect.
-Steve