 LibbyBurrows 2009-08-03 . chapter 4OMG No! He jumped?! |
 Eerie Iri 2007-08-12 . chapter 1This looks pretty good. |
 angel-Janna 2007-02-14 . chapter 13 I write on Fictionpress normally but I discovered this lovely fanfic through Deviantart. Well done! I was really glad to find a sensitively written, gripping story that was in your own unique style. I enjoyed the hooks, I kept wondering what was happening to Malfoy even though you'd described it as bipolar... but anyway, well done and well-written.
Keep writing!!
Jannax |
 billy 2007-01-18 . chapter 13 I likey |
 journeyforever 2006-10-09 . chapter 13I love it!! Defiantly do a sequal! |
 XiaoGui 2005-07-18 . chapter 13I absolutely enjoyed this story, and I'm glad I eventually read it.
You know that I love your "Secrets & Lies", as it is truly a monumental story. But this one has a couple of great point on its own - firstly, as I said in an earlier review, the scenes are so true to life and you have a couple of great pictures in it (I just remember the "fingers of blood" on Lupin's face - I love such expressions!). And secondly, I really enjoyed your style of writing in this fic. I think I like it even better than in S&L, and it's obvious that you put your heart in this fic. (not that I think that you didn't do this with S&L, but... argh, I hope you know what I mean ;-)).
Great read, thank you very much! :-) |
 XiaoGui 2005-07-18 . chapter 12The appearance of Dumbledore made me shiver, it was very powerful! |
 XiaoGui 2005-07-18 . chapter 11Whoah!! Now everyone is going to the hospital wing, yes? ;-)) |
 XiaoGui 2005-07-18 . chapter 10Maybe the characters are ooc, but what's really great in your fic here is that it's so true to life. Call me stupid, but I absolutely loved the scene in the toilet. This little line of Draco leaning on the porcellain made me feel the cool thing on my own forehead as well. Wonderful! |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-26 . chapter 9Mr. Parkinson is an *censored*... grr..
However, even if he seems extreme in here, I guess this could happen in real life as well, couldn't it? :-/
And I don't really pity Lucius much, after all how he is/has been treating his house elves. ;-) |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-26 . chapter 8O_O Narcissa is not very ...nice.
Hey, I think I know Minky, hihi.. ;-) |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-26 . chapter 7Ack, Lucius is so stupid to keep his wand!
So I was right about the skeleton ;-). I like the connection you draw here between Severus and Lucius. I suspected that Severus had known all along what's the "problem" with Draco. |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-24 . chapter 6"alienist" - I learned a new word today :-)..
I love caring Severus! He was so nice and gentle.. :-)
Poor Draco! Remembering chapter 1 (or 2) I think I know what that skeleton in the Malfoy's closet is. |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-24 . chapter 5This is getting wilder and wilder!
The little dispute between Snape and DD was great! :-) |
 XiaoGui 2005-06-24 . chapter 4Oh.my.God! This was breathtaking!
"Snape used the tone reserved for making first years wet themselves." hihihi.. loved this line! :-D |