now this story was deep.it kind of spoke to me.

Oh that was beautiful! Short, but sweet and to the point. I loved that last line of Fuuma's too. Looking forward to more from you!
Luv, X
Jen~

Really good! Cant wait for the next chapter! THis chapter sort of touched my heart and I was kinda crying in between...weep. GOod job and excellent writing skills! If u like humor too, read my fafic if u like! So update and god job!

... it's so GOOD.
@_@ I loved it.

Like all your stories, the writing is beautiful and deserves more recognition. I'm not very good at constructive criticism, so I think I'll just say that you are indeed very talented.

Beautiful.
Your desscriptive writing is very pretty!!

Aww...that was so kawaii! I loved it! Such sweet F/K goodness ^_^ Keep up the good work!