 SuperLardBucket 2009-04-21 . chapter 5Oh, this is getting interesting. I can't wait for the next one... |
 Gabb 2004-09-06 . chapter 5 Update! |
 Seraph-chan 2004-07-28 . chapter 5 I love your fic! Actually, I read it before a long time ago and this is the second time. ^^ Your main plot line so far seems to be the splitting, but remember to develop the whole letter business. You know... who wrote it and all that. If you don't, people will notice and complain. Secondly, please update! I know you want to rework it and all, but this is a very good plot line, I think. There's a lot of room to work with. ^^ yay. Keep it going, ne~ |
 Alex Ultra 2004-07-27 . chapter 5WOW!! I like very much!
*Blink* I'm sure I could come up with some additional comments, and probably praise... but I can't seem to think of any at the moment... Oh well.
^.^ I've never heard of 'Bifurcation', and even though I understood and could practically demonstrate cellular division (not literally, of course...), I could never remember the names of the stages...
LATER!! |
 AnimegirlHF 2004-03-27 . chapter 5ACK! DUDE! YOU HAVE TO FINISH THIS! Please! Don't leave me hanging! Please please PLEASE update this soon! |
 Niana Kuonji 2004-03-19 . chapter 5 Ouchie, that HAD to hurt...*snickers* but this oughta make things interesting... |
 Sniper-of-Death 2004-03-18 . chapter 5This can't be good...wait...THE GIRL HALF IS PRAGNANT! I FIGURED IT OUT, MUAHAHAHAHA...*Zap* Where am I? Oh yea, LUNCH TIME...I think... |
 CompMan44 2004-03-17 . chapter 5X.X Tetsuo, either you're on the other side of the world, or you have the same inverted circadian as me; I swear your review came up not 10 minutes after I posted—at 11:30 PM. But thanks!
ShadowRose: "did I spell that right" Are you thinking of "cytokinesis"? (Thank you, dictionary.com.) Either way, the list I'm going by must call it something else, because that's not in it. Glad you liked.
jh: I like to see myself as having a "logical mind," ergo the use of "actual science." Plus it's nice when a story makes sense. And I understand your point about personal preference quite well. ^_^ |
 TetsuoTsubushi 2004-03-17 . chapter 5every chapter that comes just makes me want to see even more, especially now. I gotta see the finished version. |
 jh 2004-03-07 . chapter 4 This is very well-written. The characters are as they should be, and (what the function?) you are using ACTUAL SCIENCE in this. To tell the truth, I'm not too crazy about the plot, but then I'm not one for unusual sci-fi anyway. In other words, it's just a personal preference deal. Toodles! |
 TetsuoTsubushi 2004-03-06 . chapter 4a third arm now, I just can't wait to see the fourth, and the extra legs. It's funny thinking of him having more than normal amounts of appendages. |
 ShadowRose 2004-03-06 . chapter 2 It's really quite clever how you used the Mitosis phases as chapter names... I can't wait until telophase and Cytocynisis(did I spell that right) best of luck! |
 Anonymous 2004-03-06 . chapter 4 Wow! I think Ryoga will lock himself in his house (if he finds it) when he discovers the truth (what would it be if THAT happened to him) |
 CompMan44 2004-03-06 . chapter 4Ah, the horrors of MPD.
Zorknot: Terry Pratchett! Woohoo! If you haven't read it, you have got to check out Good Omens; it's one of my favorites by far. Regarding Nabiki, well... all right, I may end up editing or rewriting that part; I don't think I was sufficiently caffeine-laden when I wrote that. (I may have also accidentally mixed in personalities from other characters in other anime... oops.)
GitM: Why, thank you! As for your second question; I've already got that covered, although in a rather unconventional manner, I suppose.
bruce: In a sense, you're right--it isn't Ranma. On the other hand, it is Ranma. Understand? Good, explain it to me. |
 bruce 2004-03-05 . chapter 4 Well, I was reading along with interest, when I ran into this -
"Look, this whole curse thing—don’t get me wrong, I don’t want it to end up killing you, either, but… somehow I get this feeling that… it’ll turn out well. Plus I get to escape from this boring mind of yours—
Boring!? Come on, martial arts is my life!! How can you think that’s boring?
The same way you think biology is boring."
Suddenly, I'm put off.
If he/she doesn't like martial arts, he/she ain't Ranma to me. (My principal problem with _Genma's Daughter_, BTW). |