amazing story. well put together and smooth twists and turns. I'm extremely impressed. Please, keep writing.
I also enjoyed all the little notes at the end of almost every chapter.

That was a very good and entertain story! You are a very talented writer!

You sir, are a god.

I haven't read a single JLA or JSA comic but I've read a lot of fanfic based on DC comics and have watched the Justice League cartoon, and I found the story extremely easy to follow (with the help of Wikipedia for info on those superheroes I didn't know).

The pacing was done very well, the evil plot and counterplot extremely well thought-out (just in case you try to take over the world), and -- e -- you managed to slip in Bruce and Diana's budding relationship (I *adore* the pairing).

You also nicely captured the voices and personalities of the characters (if I may suggest another writer who, in my honest opinion, absolutely *NAILED* the characters, it would be David Hines with 'Escape Artistry', also on fanfiction dot net).

All in all, I wish you the very best in your novel writing and will be looking forward to any stories you may publish or put online in the future.

Kind regards

Will

This fic was epic!

very good. I really liked it. Although you should do a sequal in which Diana is pregnant. That would be too cool.

I've meant to write the review last February as I finished the whole chapter. But just didn;t make it.

But one word: FANTASTIC! You are one of the best Bruce-Diana writer I know in this universe. THe story telling is neatly weaved. I just love the way you make many heroes coming together. And of course the wit of Diana in her first person - really amazing. She's protrayed perfectly. A smart funny woman who is sure of herself and her love to Bruce. And I can see Batman talking in the podium during the briefing.

Can you write something more about Bat-WW? I know you made an epilogue for the Power play. But I mean, there should be more afterwards... more dynamics and cooperation between them etc.

This story was excellent! Kept me rivited to my seat. The characters were well rounded and you wove each one neatly in the story -- I even got a little history on each, which was very helpful.

I wish the powers that be would make your story into a movie or as part of JLU. You should shop it around. Keep up the good work!

ARGH!

Your stories are magnificant, but I was reading this one, and part of chapter 25 is apparently not downloading correctly. Maybe it's my computer (I am at my schools), who knows?

Love the way you have portrayed this relationship though!

wOOt~! For ye!

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I find, that when inviting skilled potential writers to join a fanfiction group, it helps to actually give them the full yahoo email address of the person I'm referring to too. Yet, because I'm a moron, I did not. The editor's name is Tony and he's at brawl2099@ I hope you decide to join us.

Excellent, simply excellent.

As for Luthor, I'm glad you've left him in the position that you did. You combined the Silver Age and modern variations of Luthor and from that, put Luthor in a hole that while he's not necessarily screwed, he won't easily get out of.

In short, you really outdid yourself this time, Rick. I shall now say it one last time -- THIS was how Luthor should have been taken out, THIS should have been the event of the summer. Keep up the great work and take a rest -- you've earned it.

Brilliant

Upon further review, I find plutonium isn't quite as deadly as I original believed by a few orders of magnitude. It's still pretty deadly though. One wonders by what mechanism Diana's blood was able to deal with the contamination.

That said, overall this was a pretty good action adventure tale that showed excellent characterization and a detailed knowledge of the the source material. Unlike most current comics writers, you don't treat continuity as something you found on your heel that needs scraped off before walking on the carpet.

See you next story.

Before I start, let me say everthing about this title is exceptional. The plotting, characterization, action, everything. It's quite a large puzzle you have here, but damned if it doesn't look perfect

And that's why I'd like to invite you to join a DC fanfiction that's currently forming. It's set after I.D Crisis and War Games. Some titles are taken yes (Batman and WW among them) but the vast, vast majority of potential titles isn't even close to tapped. And it's with that in mind I'd like to invite you to join DC Revolution. If you're interested, email my editor at brawl2099@ We have no deadlines to worry about, and it's a good place to interact with other writers I feel. Even if you decline I think you'll find working in group fanfiction to be quite fun. I know I did. Thanks for your time.

Wow Tnaks i have really enjoyed reading this story for the last 10 months this is the reason why i been coming to fanfiction.

Best of luck with the novel

All I can say is wow! This was monumental in its scope. You pulled off one of the best fanfics i have everhad the pleasure of reading. You took the characters and expenaded on them while keeping them true to their canon selves. You took some forgotten and lesser known characters and made me at least more interested in them than in some of the popular characters. I guess my only complaint is that we didn't get to see the missing league members' reactions to what happened. Once again great job, and as always gime more!