Good one-shot, shattering Barbara's walls with one question.

Interesting... it gave a real impresion. GREAT!

-Creative Spark

that's a good story

WOW!! Totally in character for both of htem. For someone who doesn't talk much Bruce sure knows what to say when he does. Great little story.

Boo-yah! Veddy, veddy nice voice characters.

Excellent insight as always.

Nice. I can definetelly see Batman doing something like that in the comics. Good job!

Wow, that was a great short, and a great way to get Batman's perspective on the break up without having him step out of character.
And what he said to her...boy was that ever potent. It was exactly the right thing to say, exactly what she needed to hear. All in all, great work.

Short, clear and good.