Aww... that story was so cool! Maybe you should write some like it, but with a twist? Not a twist that would kill the meaning, but something different? I really liked the story.

Your story is going along really great! Do you do a lot of writing, cos your skills are good!

Your writing is kool. A lot of thought put into what you write.

I like that chapter... did Belgemine really come from Zanarkand? Cos if she didn't, that's really creative making her do so.

Hey, kool story! You like fics with Shuyin/Lenne? I do. :0 Great work

Okay i haven't actually read your story yet, but i was wondering if i could put it on my Lenne and Shuyin fansite. E-mail me at Darkangel_terry11@hotmail.com to gice me your answer.

Oh goodness, that was the best fanfiction I've read, literally.

^o^ I love this fic and will continue reading it tommorow! You have to wirte another! You have a great writing style and are able to keep the facts while making it a fiction! Well until next time!
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Great chapter.I enjoyed how you made Odin Lenne's aeon, instead of one from FF X. Well, i got to go to bed, but I will finish reading your great story tommorw! BYE!

Yay Shuyin! you saved Lenne again. And the Ronso are here now. Very cool, I love Ronso. Well i'm gonna read one more chapter before i go to bed.
KEEP UP THE EXCELENT WORK!!

Hey Again! Sorry if i'm getting annoying, because I'm reviewing so much ^_^
well anyaws, this was a really good chapter on Maechan. Once again you've answered questions I've been wondering about.

Another great chapter!

You know, before you wrote this, i never thought Maechan could be this cool. but i was proven wrong.
i liked how you added Yevon and Yunalesca in, during this chapter. Onward to the next!

Wow! Another great chapter. How did you come up with all of your ideas? There so awesome!
Go Shuyin! You don't let anyone hurt your girl!

Hm. After i finished X-2 I've been haveing alot a questions lately. One was "What were Lenne's parents like?"
And you've proably had the best idea about them that I've read about in fan fiction. Very good Keep up the good work!