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| Minuit-Glace 2007-01-06 ch 5, | abuseThis is really funny couldn't stop laughing! |
| Calleigh-star 2006-11-03 ch 5, | abuseI loved it |
| Tabbiez 2006-06-12 ch 2, | abuseIt's really good so far, except that some of the grammar and spelling errors are a bit distracting. :) |
| Bob 2006-01-23 ch 5, anon. | abuseHaha, hilarious!! The sad thing is that i can actually picture Stokes in a dress...and its disturbing beyond belief. |
| ForensicsFreak1988 2005-10-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseLOL! I love it. |
| the mystical voice from up ... 2005-09-23 ch 5, | abuseit was brilliant it was so funny |
| duckyv91 2005-04-27 ch 5, | abusehahahahahha i think this is awesome. pink clothing scares me but ok! |
| Flamingo1 2005-04-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseMWAHAHAHA! I love the pink clothes prank...though Nicky walking around in a dress was fabulous too. Grissom's revenge...I wouldn't make him mad, he has bugs... There should be more of Sara in here, but other than that, it's good! Bonne Nuit! |
| d 2004-02-14 ch 5, anon. | abuseHad me roaring with laughter.. Very good. More! |
| DriedByRain 2004-02-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseit was okay...I mean to me it didn't really have a chance to develop the plot or scheme, and Warrick, Greg, and Nick's prank seemed a little childish. |
| Sweet Jorja 2004-02-10 ch 5, | abuseDUDE! That was SO awsome. I must abmit, when it comes to Valentine's Day, I am more like Grissom. Meaning it isn't one of my favorite holidays. But ANYWHOO!! That was GREAT! I was laughing so hard I almost spit out my spaghettios!! LOL The part with the waiter was just, PRICELESS!! Poor Nicky!! LOL Keep writing!! Maybe you could add some more fun revenge. My friend always tells me 'Don't get sad. Get revenge!' And it is true! only if it isnt harmfull ya know? Anyway, great story! ~Sweet Jorja |
| GroversCSI 2004-02-09 ch 5, | abuseOh sad, you can't end it there! You did a great job, and would love to see Nicky in a dress! |
| Bleeding-Gemstone 2004-02-08 ch 5, | abuseHow cute. I'm gay, and I wasn't offended at all. Keep writing!! |
| EMILLIO 2004-02-08 ch 4, | abuseLOL! I would love to see Nick in a dress.update soon. |
| Bleeding-Gemstone 2004-02-07 ch 4, | abuseKeep writing! I wanna know what happens!! Keep it up, punk! |