Forgive me for not reviewing this soner, Gackt-sama! This fic is great! And it isn't really cliche. I mean, unlike "cliched" fics, you've managed to put in lots of lots of details about why Endymion would act so indifferent, so cold. Not only that, you've written the whole thing perfectly too! I've read fics that are clearly set in the "medieval-like" period, but the characters use modern day slang words. ^^; Great job!

Wow, that was beautifully written. I'm rather speechless, but I enjoyed it nonetheless. I would like to read more of this piece, curious as to where you shall take it. ^^

I love this! This is an excellently written story!

Beautiful wording - rather a good 1POV. Hums of a few other stories I have read, but certainly better written! Good luck and keep writing!

Quite interesting...please continue on with your story. I'm intrigue to see what comes. :P

That was very nicely written ^-^. I'm eager to read the rest!!

This sounds facinating, and I would look foreward to reading more. I don't think you should give it up.
How did she fall from the sky?
Why is she afraid?
Why is she seeking sanctuary?

hey.. i just read this fanfic and thought it was great! Write the next chapter ASAP!! please please send in the next chapter soon.. thanks.. good lUCK!

Love it!! You write so well!

sounds like a fanfic that i would like to hear more from. i'm interested to see how this will all play out in the end. keep writing and updating!

very nicely done. it flows well, and the first person vantage point was done better then most people do. I'm very intrigued, though it is a slight bit cliche, it could be done many ways from here, and it would be wonderful if you could continue it.
I may have to take a swing at it myself, just for the hell of it... though I doubt it would be written well enough to be posted >>;