WOW!! This was a really good story! great work! thank you!

Once again, you brought the characters to life. Amazingly well written! Great job.
Chione

ADD STORY TO MY FAVORITES LIST definitely! WOW! Do you exercise that type of insight for a living? I absolutely love the court room scene. What a way to answer those questions - made so much sense! Hit home! and really pointed out the reason the defense wanted a yes/no answer. I could really relate - wish I had some of Elizabeth/Beth/Bess etc., understanding in me. I can dissociate but just for a blink of an eye which doesn't really make sense to me. AND the way you relate all this to BUTTERFLIED brings it all together - You have an ability to create here. To teach also. I love the way they (G/S) talk it out at the end - and throughout. Kind of like the saying, "You can either have a college degree in ten years or just be ten years older". It is all about choices. Thanks for a profoundly well-written fic.

Wow, Burked. That was an intense story. Very well done. I don't know anything about mental diseases, but I cringe when most writers use someone who has them. This may not be accurate, but it reads that way. It's not overblown or typical nutjob.

Burked, how is it that every new story of yours leaves me speechless with awe and a little bit of envy. Nobody does intelligent and innovative CSI fanfic like you do (well, maybe Mossley too! :-) I can't imagine the amount of research that went into the creation of Bess, Beth and Elizabeth. You make it seem so easy and that takes sheer talent. Don't you think you can throw over Max Allan Collins and take over the authorship of the CSI books series? Of course I just love the light touch that you have with G/S. Grissom and Sara's journey of the heart as you portray it is *so* touching and believable. It is truly an honor and treat to read your stories. Thanks for sharing them with us.

Amazing job! It was so brave of you to delve into an area as complicated as DID, but you thoroughly explained and detailed everything so well that I feel like I've learned so much! I love the G/S stuff and how both Grissom and Sara grow and change and make decisions as they work through the case, and it all comes together beautifully. Great job, as usual!

Burked - great story. You always do such a great job. The plot was great (okay, getting the picture why I don't right? lol), Bess was interesting. The Grissom-Sara was perfect.

I love your stuff. My only wish is you could write for your fans full-time.

Spectacular! I'm at a loss to describe just how great this story is! Suffice it to say, I love it...

great as always

Oh Burked bured burked burked BURKED!!
Another great great story that deserves much praise.
I found it so fascinating about the multiple personalities and how they interact in this one case at least, so I thank you for teaching me something new.
I can always count on you to have intelligent, interesting, geeklove fanfics :D

I really loved this story. I'm part of your mailing list, so I read it on your site, but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. I recently did a report for college on dissociative identity disorder - more specifically the case of Sybil, so to see it in another form, aside from that, was something great. Keep writing, because I want to keep reading. :)

There is a reason you are considered the finest CSI fanfic writer around, and this story is a perfect example of it.
You've created a very believable OC as the victim, even though she has a complex condition. Very few writers could handle the subject matter with the skill or sensitivity you have. Most would have portrayed her as very over-the-top.
As always, you nailed the characters spot on.

I wish I could create such amazing things like you do. The victim(s) in this case presented a new twist to the story. I liked the parallels you drew between the G/S and Rudat's overcoming her fears.

What a great story!