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ash and fire
2006-12-14
ch 7,
abuselove it
dreamer1010
2006-05-23
ch 8,
abusewow nice ending. nah im just kidding it was a great story and i really liked it. so what if you decided to end it earliy and well...rather abrubly. it was a good stoey and whoever decided to ** and moan needs to get a life.
ultimaguy0
2005-08-23
ch 1,
abusekool
chibichibimoon6
2005-05-03
ch 8,
abuseThis story was the best i have read in a while and i think maybe there should be a sequal or something like that cuz i loved it.I hope i can expect more fan fics out of you later on. Until then i hope to read more from you. Thanks for the fic bye.
The Deviant Villain
2005-02-14
ch 1,
abuseLuved the chapter and I know that I have already reviewed 4 this fic but I'm reviewing again becuase I want 2 add it 2 my favorites.

PS I would like u 2 e-mail me and explain what u meant in the last chapter. Did the baby Kagome was going to have die or were u talking about something else? PLZ LET ME KNOW I'M SO CONFUSED!
Mayab
2004-12-31
ch 8,
abuseit's bad you don't want to finish this story, but you don't deserve to be bitched at. it's your story, and your choice. but anyway, what's out is good!
Moonlit-Mistress
2004-12-29
ch 8,
abuseUm is it over? Was Songo Peragnate also or did Kagome loss her baby?
Shinegami's Little Sis
2004-11-12
ch 8,
abuseAh... *pouts* cruddy ending... Good luck with future stories though! I really liked this one.
gothic inuyasha
2004-10-21
ch 7, anon.
abuselol u abandoned your old account an people r still waiting lol love the story keep up the great work!
Iridecence
2004-10-19
ch 8, anon.
abuseWow, that was the best written chapter of all of them.
xANIMELADYY
2004-10-17
ch 8,
abusekewl story
Fallen Karma Angels
2004-10-12
ch 8, anon.
abusehahahahaha.
oh- you are just too damn funny.

you know, it's one thing to say you hate your own stories, but it is COMPLETELY another to say you hate another author's stories.

personally, we think you're a **. you can't just randomly diss any author you want. god, if everyone on this site did that, it would be war. we think Maiden of the Moon is a great authoress. infact, A LOT of people believe she is as well, and if you think different, you can always shut your fat ** mouth and keep it to yourself. what if she had read this? okay, so maybe your intent was for her to read it, but if you wanted to let her know how you feel, then maybe you should tell her.

also, why diss your own stories? honey- that's beggin' for people to tell you how wonderful it was- pathetic sympathy if you ask us. OR your beggin' for people to not read anymore stories. whatever your excuse is, we're sure its crap. and weither or not you like a story you wrote, you don't need to tell everyone how much you hate it- let alone compare it to anyone else's.

we also want you to know that we WERE big fans of you. but you just seem like a ...oh, how do you say it...a bland...**. we hope you enjoy losing readers cause you just lost some. have fun writing about how much you hate everything, and at this point, we are sorry we ever read your stories.

until next time
Fallen Karma Angels
Ai Inu Koi
2004-10-08
ch 8,
abuseI loved your story. I thought it was really great! I understand how you lost interest in Inuyasha. The same thing happened to me. They played it so many times that I'm sick of it right now. I had to drop him and edit myself so I know there are a lot of mistakes. I hope your stress goes away soon and that what's happened doesn't stop you from writing. I really love your work!

Ai Inu Koi
King of the Kitana
2004-10-08
ch 8, anon.
abuseokay so what you're saying in the last chapter is that the baby that kagome was carrying died and that she never became a mother. you know I just want to know? anyway besides my father's logical thinking coming into my mind it was a kick ** story.

-King of the Kitana-
LHatcher
2004-10-08
ch 8, anon.
abusei understand.i hope you have better luck with writing stories in the future. :)
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