Wow, a believable Haradrim story. I think Tolkien would be proud that some people took the time to develop a culture he didn't. I agree with the other reviewers. The pace is excellant. I don't think I saw any typos. The title seems a bit generic but it works, so no biggie. :) Everyone introduced so far seems believable and realistic. I know it's just the first chapter, but I wonder why Amir is "fighting for Mordor"? I'd love to find out and I hope you continue the story. It's RARE to find a good LotR story these days on FF.net.

Interesting... Not too many people write about Haradrim... and almost nothing is known about them. I will be looking forward to learning more about your views on them. *hugs*

Wow, this looks great. You really have the pacing of the story down. I like it when people don't write the same cliches over and over. Way to go for being different, in a good way!

This is nice. I hope more will arrive quickly!

I love it! Yay for Haradric writers! *gives you another 'I love Haradrim' bumpersticker*

'Tis good. I'd been under the impression that it was the Mearas, not the Meares, but it's been way too long since I've read T. I especially like the imagery at the beginning.