This was a grand one!
This is how i would like the last tP movie to be!

Well written and plot -wise perfect.
The depth and details; the Oc's and the logic of how you disposed of the Bad guys and everything else speaks for themselves.

You delivered one of the best Pretender fics i've read. One Story that leaves nothing but a feeling of contentment!

Kudos and thanx.

Absolutely amazing!

I just wanted to tell you that I have devoured your writings these last 2 days (darn RL for slowing me down) and I am thrilled with your work. I look forward to your new works and wait for the sequel to your sequel.

I have really enjoyed this story - lots of intrigue, strong characterization, and the very best, MP DOES go with Jarod who will love her and care for her until the end of time. Evil Raines has been put in his place, Sam is okay, slimy Lyle is confined, Sydney and Broots and Debbie are secure, and the Centre is tethered. Good work, we very much appreciated it. Now, on to the next project for us to read and enjoy. Thanks for sharing your talents with us.

Excellent story. Was surprised to find that this was the ending chapter however. Totally enjoyed Miss P sending Lyle away to prison for a long time, Raines not being able to hurt Syd or Broots, the surprise tryst at Parker's house, and of course Parker and Jarod running away together even if they brought along her bodyguard.

I LOVE the way you portray Parker - making her the totally kick a** gal that she is! And she is nothing if not loyal, so it makes complete sense that she decides to take Moriyama with her. What an odd little family... LOL!
Thanks!
Ginger:-)

Great descriptions of their feelings. i'm glad Sydney confronted Parker.
Hurry up with the next chapter! : )

Hope they will have a happy ending.

Getting Mr. Lyle arrested, that was good!

Callisto, I'm confused. I think I remember a chapter about J and MP's dinner and the movie they watched. I don't see that part in the story anymore. I remember Parker hating the movie J selected, but liking the dinner, and it was lobster. What happened?
P.S. Love the story!

Nice plot. Very complicated but not always explained well enough. This chapter made it all very clear but the previous chapters were hard to read and left me in a lot of doubt. Maybe some time indicators at the start of segements would be good to show whether it is in that past furture or present. keep writing, I sense some good bits coming up.
(: Earthdrago

Thanks for the update, and I REALLY hope that J and MP get slimy Lyle. Hopefully, that can totally "fry his goose", "do him in", "stop him in his tracks" - you get my drift here? Mostly I hope that J and MP are able to be together - they love each other and deserve to be happy together! Please post agian soon.

This story is great please update soon

It's get better and better, I can't wait to read more.

well that was interesting. I can't wait to read more. please don't let us wait for too long.