I know when I see good fan fic when I read one and this HAS BEEN ONE OF THE BEST! Can you please make a third one or a saga PLEASE! I want to see what's the baby's name, the gender at least and how is Rachel's family going to do. And like most people who have both READ 'n' REVIEW this, this is Little Anya tellign you keep up with the writing!

*Disappears in a flock of Fire Flies*

*Little Anya*

You *will* write the sequel This was great. Can't wait for more.

MORE! Moremoremoremoremore pleeeeeease! hehe I've read all of your Max Steel fics, (and a couple of your non Max Steel fics) and they are all so good! Please? Write more? For me and Maxy? *puppy dog look* I'll write more if you do! Oh yes, and thanks for putting me on your favorites, I'm so honored. *throws chocolate kisses into the air and runs out in a hyper hurricane*

Okay when am I gonna see more to this? :)

Loved the story! It was kinda sad after Rachel said no and left! Please continue and give us readers a happy ending to the story!

That was a surprise. I'm not trying in any way to bash your story. It's a great idea, and you're a wondeful writer. I'm just dying to know what happens next! Will Rachel have an abortion? Will Josh/Max work up the courage to propose again? Will Berto and the rest of N-tek ever figure out what happened? What's Rachel going to name the baby? Is that really Rachel's middle name? How about answering all of these, or as many as you can, in the third and final(?) chapter! Thanks for writing, and luv ya all!

-Maxy Steel

Poor Rachel. I bet she didn't see that coming. Will this be the last in this series?