Wow that was really good. I totally saw Joan in my head saying that. You really captured her in your writing. Awesome, absolutley wonderful...
I can't wait to see more stories from you.

Wow, that was really great! I actually imagined Joan possibly writing this in a diary. Great insight into the character.

wow--it seems like a really difficult thing to write believably in the voice of a teenager--to not make the person too wise, or too precocious, or too cute, or too cliched. you do an admirable job.