 tigereyes320 5/21/04 . chapter 1 hey Donna Lynn I have an Idea about MX that I would love your help with please email me at I have a really good idea and could use your help
Thanks,
Maria |
 PladPrincess 3/22/04 . chapter 1I think you did a great job! I've been to your site too and have read some of the fics on there as well. You've done great with all of them. Hope to see more from you soon! D |
 Chitsuki Masuki 2/9/04 . chapter 1wow that was deep... Poor shal.. and you wrote it as though Jesse love shal.. was that your purpose? |
 viviana 2/4/04 . chapter 1 Hello and it's always love to read your stories.
I also love this one even let's face it it is kind of sad.I am not sure but I guess this is the first non Brennan/Shalimar appearances.I think that making this sad moment be shared between Shalimar and Jesse was a brillant idea.
I love all the emotion of the story. It shows that Shal has trully some deep feelings towards Brennan. And it kind of fits in with what I think is going on in the show. So nice work again!
Viviana |
 frickangel 2/4/04 . chapter 1This was good. You hit the Shal&Bren thing pretty well and this is coming from a non-fan of the Shal&Bren ship. *wink* |
 shallanfox 2/3/04 . chapter 1 I really love your point of wiew !
You are so right !
I saw Possibilities with the same regard!
Thanks |
 LoveConquers 2/2/04 . chapter 1Your fics are always so amazing! I absolutely love this! I love how Jesse is there for Shalimar, and I love how they talk. I really liked the line, "You always factor into the equation..." Great! |
 candian-chic14 2/2/04 . chapter 1 I love your stories so much, i cant wait for you to write another one. |
 sage360 2/2/04 . chapter 1 This! This was wonderful! I completely see Shalimar both understanding and appreciating Sparky's actions. And it was sweet that Jesse was there for her. Great work! When wil we get another DONNA LYNN masterpiece? Hm.- |
 a-blackpanther 2/2/04 . chapter 1That is so impressive...It was really nice...ty. |
 goldstranger 2/2/04 . chapter 1I've read quite a few of these today and I gotta say only two of these made much sense. Yours being one.
I like that you took hold of something and made it slight from life experience. It shows through Shalimar's words and Jesse's support for her.
I really like this one. You did good. |
 Jenn11 2/2/04 . chapter 1Great story. I love the Shal/Jess banter. VEry much like them. Very good description of their relationship. "Two steps forward, three steps back" so very true. Very sweet portrayal of their emotions. |
 Lucygoosey 2/2/04 . chapter 1I like it very much. It's exactly what I would have expected out of the two of them. You will continue, I hope? |