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Reviews for: The Imbolc Serpent
Duhbla
2005-07-19 . chapter 1
cool
Quills 'N Ink
2004-09-13 . chapter 1
This is really nice. I like how this eneded and it was written well.
Alyndra
2004-05-13 . chapter 1
I just finished rereading all your stories (although I haven't reviewed before -- shame on me) and am impressed anew at the quality of your writing. You have a very good grasp not only of JKR's characters but also of her writing style, and it is some of the best fanfiction (and I've read a lot) I've seen. I loved the Imbolc Serpent here: "Yes, they're a bit like buses, Dark Lords . . ."
Snakes really don't have eyelids? That *would* make it hard to wink, wouldn't it?
I love seeing expansion on Harry's Parselmouth ability. I wish it would come up more often, but in both canon and fanon it's largely forgotten about. One of my pet theories is that Ginny is a Parselmouth (if Voldemort passed it to Harry, isn't it even more feasable that Tom Riddle passed it to Ginny?) but good luck trying to find a story featuring that.
Anyway, I'll be looking forward to mid-June and your next update.
Sarafina Pekkala
2004-04-07 . chapter 1
I'm leaving this review at the end of your last story, though it really refers to the whole thing.
Awesome! I love how your stories are interrelated; it's easier for me to read five five-chapter fics than one twenty-five-chapter fic, for some reason. And it's all so fascinating! I like how much Harry speaks in Parseltongue; I think Rowling should have him talk to snakes more often. And I'm looking forward to seeing how the Aitvairas (sp?) thing turns out. Plus it'll be fun to see what's up with the DADA teacher. Baby Harry sounds so cute! And it's nice for Snape to get a little bit of recognition. (Not too much, though, or his head will swell :). )
Well, this review is strange and incoherent, but the main idea is that I really like your stories and I'm looking forward to more.
SleepsInOctober
2004-02-06 . chapter 1
O! I really enjoy your writing. It may take a while to appear, but it is worth the wait for such quality.
I'll be (impatiently) checking your work again in mid April.
JennyRad
2004-02-06 . chapter 1
Good heavens ... How extraordinary ... a very interesting start ...
Fate
2004-02-05 . chapter 1
Great chapter!
Can't wait for more!
Ookla The Mok
2004-02-04 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this story, but what about Grindelwald? Why doesn't he count as the dark wizard before Voldemort? I would think he would at least cross Harry's mind during this scene.
Your short but interconnected stories are a refreshing change from the other fics populating this section. I also like your use of mythical things I've never heard of before. Your universe meshes well with the tone of the HP-verse.
Romm
2004-02-02 . chapter 1
Harry always gets the "interesting" jobs doesn't he? Is Dumbledore wise enough to see what the Serpent meant about the difference between Dark and Dark? *grins* You've got such fun fics.
Olivia Wood
2004-02-02 . chapter 1
I'm glad you continued with the Dark Wizard's Ball. It was inspired. :) I love your universe. Update soon.
ReflectionsOfReality
2004-02-02 . chapter 1
I was going to try the theatrical 'Your Alive!' but considering I did read the last chapter of harmless and easily domesticated I know it has not been to long ago. If only authors head more time to write and some hyperactive muses (had them once, wrote a few chapters and finished up a few of my pieces of art including one on a canvas. I must of slept for at least 18 hours after that four days).
Good as always.
Keep Writing regardless if it is here else you would be robing something special from man kind,

~Reflections~
HarrisDaniel@hotmail.com
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