This is excellent! It reminds me of my philosophy class because it made me remember "what is real? how do we know it is real?"

OMFG. THIS IS SO AMAZING

great story

Wow that was so good.

Very deep...I like it.

Nya! So sweet. A lot of times, this had me thinking of the song, "I Hear You Everywhere" from the Chobits Sound Track.

my gosh that was such an awesome oneshot! and so cute!

If Sasuke is dead, how can he touch/move Sakura? O_O?

Oh wow...how...*ponders for right word* deep! LOL very nice! XD

the last line took a few seconds to register... but i really like it! very nice! bybyyu

interesting...confusing as it was.

In one word: Beautiful...

I loved the way you were able to write in Sasuke's PoV, but still incorporate such detail and emotion in his thoughts...

Keep up the great work in future works...

P.S I LOVED the ending v

Hoe. HOW BEAUTIFUL. Honestly. XDXDXD The progression of Sasuke's thoughts was done well-very detailed, very emotional. You could actually imagine what was happening through his point of view. Such a pretty one-shot... (inspired by Sunfreak and Kenhime? No wonder. XP) But it was so good. :D And the ending, oh the ending. Amazing!

why are all your stories one-shots? they're so good, you should continue more of them!

this is more like a poem than a story, good job though...sniff.