Nii x Ririn? ~Shutters~

OMG, *please* continue this! Not only is it very unique in style, but the pairing is... so very uncommon that I'm dying for more!

You do like building up the suspense don't you? Good job on Nii's character.

Nii is just plain evil and deserves to have something very unpleasant happen to him. Hopefully soon. And your writing is far too effective to be comfortable, and far too good not to be effective. :)

Ukoku = Filth. But we knew that.
Lovely writing, by the way.

E scary! *shudders* But then in my case Nii scares the bajeezus out of me. LOL

Ni and Lirin.. What a freaky match up! LOL should prove interesting!
an adult verson too? cool.