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silverkitsunehiei
2005-02-27
ch 7,
abusehahahhaaha ...i like it so so much...its so funny...da endin is so aya-like...
SunMoonAndSpoon
2005-02-16
ch 14,
abuse=D Oh good job! You are an excellent poet, and I loved the images it put in my head...they were disturbing and very pretty. ^_^ I'm always impressed with good poetry, especially since I can't write it at all.
Rahuru-Haru4ever
2004-09-13
ch 14,
abuseThey are all so awesome!! Especially the ones with Kyo. It almost made me cry with the one called "I'm not" and "The Snow never melts" *giggles* and finally *From the Riceball". That poem sounds like it was written by Tohru cause it sounds so much like her. Sorry I better go before I ramble on even more. ^_^
kitsunedemon
2004-08-28
ch 14,
abuseAw! ITS SO SAD! ::sniff:: Poor Yuki...::Sniff::
rabbitTsukino
2004-08-19
ch 13,
abuseThis is really great. I quiet liked it.
kitsunedemon
2004-08-15
ch 13,
abuseAw!! Poor little Kyo kitty! If I personally knew Kyo, I would call him kitty. ^_^ It would ** him off AND make me happy! But what you wrote seems very true. Its also sad. Poor Kyo and Yuki...hehe...kitty and mousey.
machoupitchounette
2004-08-02
ch 12,
abuseyes! nice girl! ( gets lots of cookies) finally, lol, i really liked it , it wasn't the riming usual one but it's nice noen the less, completely what he should be feeling, poor him, now kind of feel even worse for him than before!

anyway whos nexT?
kitsunedemon
2004-07-31
ch 12,
abusePOOR HATORI! It's so sad to watch him reminisce about Kana. Akito is really cruel for hurting all of the juunishi. I think he really did hurt them all in some way...YOU MUST UPDATE SOON! I NEED MORE OF THE POETRY-GOODNESS!
Saturn Fire
2004-06-02
ch 8,
abuseI love "The Tiger's Voice"! And i love all the others on i read. I din't have enofe time to read them all yet thogh. Shig But i cant go on tonight. I can't wate to finish reading what you have.

Saturn Fire
matchoupitchounette
2004-06-02
ch 11, anon.
abusehey! it's been a long time! this was hiros poem right? ( ^.^... did i gues?did i?)

if i did then it was great like always!
write more and more and more about everyone...
SunMoonAndSpoon
2004-06-02
ch 11,
abuseWhoo, yet another good poem from the you! The ice cream bit was really cute, put a nice image in my head. Whee!
kitsunedemon
2004-06-01
ch 11,
abuseaw...poor Hiro! he really loves Kisa doesn't he? it's soo cute! I can't wait till you update!
Kiyoshi
2004-06-01
ch 3, anon.
abuseKyo's was very nice. You did well.
Was the girl he was talking about Tohru right? That's so sweet! Anyways, lata. (good writing!)
kitsunedemon
2004-05-08
ch 10,
abuseall of your poems are so good! they are soo sad...*sniff* but the yummy fruit baskety goodness is still there...yum
SunMoonAndSpoon
2004-05-07
ch 10,
abuseE, good poem, and it wasn't confusing. People have contradictory feelings all the time. =D I like this much. Thanks for the coconut! Here, have a haw! (Tis a Chinese fruit and/or vegetable, not sure which)
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