Tre's Cool Dude. I take it now that ur li'l bro is 15?

Well he should keep writin cos he is good at it. lol.

seriously.

Just need to remember paragraphing and grammar.

other than that

DEVILISHLY GOOD

(ALTHOUGH WHY KILL THE WICCAN? T_T)

. (happy devil. lol)

Have a cookie

OMG try and Paragraph... even if it is not yours... This sets me off... and I didn't read it...

Have you not heard of grammar and paragraphs
Me
P.S Use a spellchecker more often

This story was bloody good.

Great story! Tell your brother to keep writing! I espeacially liked the "They all lived unhappily ever after" part
-Matthew