I Like the end =)

Wow. I liked this one much better than number one, though both were brilliant. I think my favorite line was when he forgot Ginny...although I do like Ginny, I just had to laugh my ** of at that one!

uh is this a slash? Cause some of it was disturbing... not to insult you are anything but it was with the uhh 'puupy kissing and the whole paragraph? It was alittle disturbing but is that a werewolf thing or a parent thing?

but i really lke the writing style but i need to know if it is or not you know!

Remus Lupin, again, is not an easy character to write. I loved all the puppy references and the whole smelling thing. Some descriptions in this fic made me want to cry. Very powerfully written, well done.

Too lazy to sign in, but I wanted to say that your writing is truly beautiful. I think that I may have reviewed this chapter already, but I will review it again. So far, I think that Part II is my favourite (I'm going to read Part I in a minute). Partly because Remus has to be one of my favourite characters, and partly because you have written him in a way I haven't seen before, and it puts many other Remus' to shame. I don't know if you are a mother or a father or what, but your writing is beautiful and heart-wrenching.
This fic was slightly faster moving and so easier to read. You have true talent. Have you written any books? Can I read them?
Thanks for many happy hours.
-Greenfly

AH!
This is great, Remus has to be one of my favourite characters ever, but AH!

The Slytherin boy who saw the Thestral was Theodopre Nott, but I find Adrian Malone an interesting character. This fic is awesome, as well as the rest of the series.

Magnificent. Wonderful. You had me crying all the way. Amazing work, just like the first.

What the hell? Okay, I think I got lost in all that jargon. No clue what's going on. At this point in the fic, there are so many questions that I wonder if you are going to be able to answer them. I just hope you can bring it all together smoothly. Actually, I have complete confidence that you can. It's just a question of whether I'll comprehend it or not.

I must say that I liked this one much better than the last. Lovely.

Wow. Moony the wolf is a strange creature. Very strange...odly childish, yet not. I guess the right word for it is instinctive...there's gotta be another word for it.
I don't know what it was about this chapter, but it didn't rub me the right way. Maybe it was Harry's reaction (or lack thereof) to Lupin's behaviour. After all, it's not every day he's called "Puppy," and to my knowledge, he has never spooned with a grown man...I'll accept it though. Isn't that what fan fiction is for? Stealing characters and shaping them into something all your own?
I'm glad Harry and Moony finally collapsed. Good job.

Beautiful. That's a good word for your writing.

Is this some strange manifestation of guilt, or some side effect of the poison? Egads, this is interesting. I'm finding that I quite enjoy Remus' point of view.
Next chapter, here I come!!

Your ability to evoke laughter is second only to your ability to evoke tears.

Part of me wonders if Moony would be that comfortable, if Harry would be that accepting... but most of me just thought that was beautiful.

Well, what have i to say? i ll add this story to favorites.
thank you for enjoyable reading.

greetings

Frodo