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| review hardship 2005-04-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseok,I liked the story and all...but...the scenes? GOTTA GO! You could have said something like.."Later that day at P3..." or something like that..I hope u think bout that whenever u write a nother story. I'm sayn this ONLY because...I think ur stories would be so much better. :-) |
| EternalConfusion 2004-08-08 ch 8,  | abuseCool fic...it might just be me, but it seemed to end a bit suddenly... |
| xXx rt xXx 2004-05-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseah, that was so good! ure a great writer, more! :) |
| Nautica7mk 2004-05-20 ch 6, | abuseLOL! I loved Chris's reaction and everyone elses confused response... that's so typically him. |
| EternalConfusion 2004-05-19 ch 6, | abuseGreat chapter, please keep going with this fic. |
| classicchic 2004-04-19 ch 5, | abusewow! i MUST know what happens next. PLEAZ? |
| b.a.b.i.b.l.u.b.l.i.s.s 2004-04-15 ch 4, | abuseis that the end? I hope not, please update soon! (if it isn't finished already that is) |
| Devonny 2004-04-15 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is really really good. Please continue soon! Are the sisters and Leo gonna find out about Chris anytime soon? I sure hope so! :D |
| classicchic 2004-04-15 ch 4, | abusePiper can't save Leo! |
| Patricia 2004-04-15 ch 4, anon. | abuse0o0o0o0o0o0. Wow that was interesting and very good. I wonder if Piper and Leo are the real reason that they were sent to the past... hm. Oh well I guess you will just have to update soon so I can know if I am correct or not. |
| Nautica7mk 2004-04-15 ch 4, | abuseWell, that's another interesting way to write how Chris was conceived. It had a kind of, Terminator feel to it. :) |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2004-04-15 ch 4, | abuseGood story. |
| TelekineticDarkness 2004-04-14 ch 4, | abuseAwesome update! I wonder if they changed the future yet...hmm... |
| Devonny 2004-04-13 ch 3, anon. | abuseThis is fantastic! Is Piper pregnant with Chris?!? :D |
| classicchic 2004-03-20 ch 3, | abusePleaz post the next chapter SOON! I need 2 no if Piper is pregnant |