That... Was... AMAZING.

That had to have been the best Jack-Angst story I have read!! I STINKIN LOVED IT! I Loved how you incorporated both mental AND physical agony!... wow, i'm so creepy.

You must write some more stuff like this! For the sake of my health!!

Jack hit Anna, HAH! I never reall did like Anna! Jack's only love is fer the ocean, freedom, an' 'is lass, Erin White! (With which 'e 'as twins wit'!) :)

I be gettin' excited 'ere! Oh boy these looks good! Ay, I be wonderin' 'ow exactly Jack, became Commodore? Hm...

I be confused once 'gain mate, wha' exactly happened? Anna wan'ed Jack dead? Bu' why? (Jus' so ye know, I don' think Ana is Jack's love, the only love of Captain Jack Sparrow is Erin White!

I 'ave t' admit 'ere mate, I be slightly confused. So, Jack's body, is wit' Ana, bu' 'is mind is in a relm of some sort? 'is 'e actually dead? I 'ope not! :) Keep up the amazing work!

I am liter'ly in shock 'ere! Oh, my goodness! I am crying right now! How could thid happen! Poor Jack! I love him! Yes, LOVE him! NO!! He can' die! Ye did a very well written chapter though! Very tortured! Very well done! :( :)

Another brilliant chapter! Now I realise the voice was inside 'is head! I guess I jus' got a little confused I guess! Keep it up!

Wow! That was brilliant! I found myself repeating the lines over an' over again! Very well written! But, tell me, was the voice the solider speakin' t' Jack? Or was it a voice inside 'is 'ead/ I became a little bit confused. :)

Wow. thats all i can say. I love the 'voices in your mind' idea, it's one of my favouraite things to read about. This story was so well written and suspenceful, i couldn't stop reading. Awsomome job, i'm not suprised it won an award.
I can't wait to read the sequel.
Great work!

wow!! that was a great story. i loved it.

AH JACK DIED! im like cryin. but the story is really good i cant stop reading it!

Uh, you killed him. There better be a twist here.

great story so far... really deep, kinda confusing tho... is the voice jack keeps hearing just something his mind conjured..?

You can't kill Jack five chapters in! It's blasphemy!

yay! good ending! i still don't really understand it tho. lol