such an evil note to leave off on… What an evil cliffie… please update soon for your cliffie is killing me with its suspense!

wow really cool so far
cant wait for the gang to get there

Absolutely great story! *heart*

I love this twist on the dimension-travel story and I am very glad that you made other-dimension Harry not a copy of the original! Though I do not exactly like other-Harry, I am wondering what you're going to do with the character... and all the others too! I especially look forward to Evan/Harry 'meeting' Destiny!

Does it make me a bad person to have laughed myself through each and every chapter? ... Mayhap it's the lack of sleep getting too me but I found the whole store terribly amusing.

Good written though, terrible cliche, but amusing and intresting to read. Found chapter 15 (I think it was fifteen -intorrigation at Hogwarts?) a bit strange since he kept mentioning the names of his dead friends without rising suspicion. They're not terribly original is all I mean (never heard Neville and Hermione before that's for sure) but I might have missed something somewhere. Might have to reread it once I get my mind sharpening up (Severus outburst still sends me into fit of giggles).

Much love, <3

Love the story so far and am looking forward to reading further.

this is the strangest story i've ever read. I have no idea whether or not I like it or not. On one hand, the story idea is original and extremely interesting. the entire tragic war hero thing is oddly appealing. On the other hand, the writing style is really distracting. the grammar makes me cringe, and Harry is just odd for one! I've never read a Harry like this before, and I kind of don't like him? XD

he's nice, strong, brave, kind, selfless, and powerful, and the epitome of angsty young war hero. But he's so frikin perfect its driving me crazy! I see him breaking down, comforting others, keeping a cool head during battles, etc but nothing that's... uh, human. He never loses his cool, and that bothers me. How does the reader connect with this Harry because I certainly didn't.

in all, I tried to like it, but couldn't continue to Chapter 5. It's like... watching your favourite TV show but there's a putrid and horrible smell in the air. You WANT to watch the show but the smell is getting to you no matter how much you ignore it, and you don't know where its coming from, so you give up and leave.

sorry if this is depressing, but anyway, good luck in your story.

Wow...crazy story...how frequently do you update?

Thanks,
Johnny Bravo

So glad u udated this story. Loved the chapter cant wait for more

hi, just finshed reading your story from chapter 1 through 25 and i must say i like it good plot and the chapters aren't too long or too short there just right. cann't wait for the nexed chapter. hm, speeking of wich i had a thought... will he find genny's body or not? hm.

Good story. Have been reading it since you started it. Hope you don't go as long between updates this time!

Unusual idea on the story, different from what I've read. Yes would like to see more, you made me stay up tell 3:30 am because could not stop reading it. Damn I hate when that happens LOL!

YAY! you up-dated! i <3 u! ive been looking forward to an update for some time! Best Alt. Unv. story i have ever read, my fav by far!! please update soon!

I am so absolutely loving this story. In one of your notes you said you mother told you to finish this...smart woman! I will definitely look forward to more from you.

I really like thi story, just read the whole thing! I look foward to an update, hopefully in the near future! :D

hey great chapter