I am addicted. Please update this asap. It is too good of a story to let sit without flushing out the rest of the plot and giving it a proper ending.

I love it! More please!

I'm still reading this wonderful story! I really hope you will continue it. I wanna know how it ends!

Please update!

Please tell me you're planning to finish this story. I just read 27 chapters, and I really want to know that it wasn't a waste of time. I love the story so far and it really deserves an ending.

This is a fabulous story. Please, please, please cintinue it.

Great chapter. Just realized I hadn't reviewed and trying to make amends. Really liked how you dealt w/J's unrealistic expectations re. his family reunion. Makes sense he'd think like that and Parker's reaction was perfect for her softer side. Also like the twist abt. the scrolls and lack of 'science lab' on the plane. Having Alex and Lyle together is a double whammy of evil doings. You've done a good job w/them and Cox throughout. Great writing.
Hope you don't make us wait too long this time.

liking this story more and more and more.

Well, I love how this is developing. I hadn't read the story in awhile, so it took me awhile to remember what happened and what the plot was. I can't wait for the ending, the knowledge of the scrolls and so on. Good luck!

Again well written.
It's a good thing that Parker understands Jarod and is able step by step to talk about his thoughts and feeling though it's a very slow process.
That Drew caught them and not his mother was funny but again a good thing because his mother wouldn't have been understanding and let them alone for some minutes.
Margaret is selfish at best and it is very difficult to follow her point of view - of course there is some understanding regarding her history - but to neglect the danger those who helped them it demonstrates a stubborness that isn't fair. She too doesn't try to understand the feelings of her own family. But she'll learn it.
The danger of being found by Lyle, Alex and Cox is still present.
I hope your next update will be soon but better later than never.

You're a evil writer. Everything is preparing for a boiling point. You describe every point and then leave us with the next cliffhanger...
I didn't mention until now what a capable writer you're (probably I told you in Survival, another fic you're still writing part by part - lots of times in between but constantly. It's the cause I believe in you finishing everything you're writing)

As everybody else I hope Alex and Victor will not be alerted by Jarod and that he will stay put until Parker will help him.

The danger is coming. I hope everybody will be able to escape before they arrive.

Finally - they learned something and Margaret stopped to deny them some truth. And the result - they start to look for solutions to get the scrolls back. But the question is why are the scrolls not destroyed until now? But that's your story and one day - I believe in you - you will tell.

Reminiscences. Sadness. Lost opportunities. I understand very well Margaret is claiming her guilty. Looking at the events who wouldn't. Nevertheless it's the Centre's fault not hers. She finally wanted the best for her children and not the fate every child endured.
Without the idea the show would never have existed but I hate there are people who look for intelligence of kids (and their genetics) to gain power over people and - the world (a little exaggerated I know but it's their aim).

Jarod and Parker - a lot of tension.
Margaret - holds her tongue (like that she causes a lot of tension and I ponder what promise she gave to Caroline to behave like that)
Debbie - smart girl. And a good timing to tell now when together with the protagonists.