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| shan21 2008-01-11 ch 21, | abuseSo, it's past 2:30 in the morning where I'm at and I've spent all day sneaking in a chapter of this when I could and then all night reading ferociously. I can't tell you how happy I am that you let them be together. From the very start I kept telling myself that I was fully prepared for a tragic or otherwise unromantic/unhappy ending. I thought it might be more realistic. But I have to admit that I was surprisingly panicked as I read the last few chapters. I was panicked because I was dreading that you'd end this and they wouldn't be together and it would kind of break my heart. So I'm incredibly happy right now, and I just loved ever instant of this. What you've done in both this story and it's prequel is amazing. Thank you so much for writing it! |
| AgentSJSands 2006-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI've read lots and lots of Sands fan fictions, because he is my favorite. I've, even written some, myself, but this has to be one of the absolute best series I've read. I never thought after all I've read that I would find something so good that I missed. You are an awesome, really awesome, author. Thanks for writing this. |
| Your Worshipfulness 2005-08-04 ch 21, | abuseFabulous, fabulous work. I love how convoluted and complicated everything is. I'm in total amazement; I'm sure I could never write anything that good. It was dark, but there were moments of levity that broke it up enough for me to appreciate it. I'm always anti-angst for the sake of angst, but this story really made the angst make sense. The tragic plot twists didn't seem like plot devices at all, but rather natural occurrences that you could have seen coming and that could be overcome. I loved your original character. It was brilliant to give her schizophrenia. It gave her that little something extra that really fleshed out the character. I'm anxious to read more of your work, so I'm putting you on Author alert. Thank you SO much for writing. ~Your Worshipfulness |
| Mrs Lovett 88 2005-07-28 ch 2, | abuseah sequel 2 eyes! thank u i didn't know this existed! i will read the rest soon as loving this thank u!! |
| Spoofmaster 2005-02-25 ch 21, | abuse*Rubs eyes* Och, I can't see it's so late. It really does say something that I sat up till midnight finishing this despite waking up at five in the morning and having a very long day. Anyway, yea. Been plowing through some stuff...was fortunate enough to click on this in the bookmarks and so I had something to do for a few days. Too bad I need that pesky thing called sleep. ...Yep. Anyway, probably going to go back to Post Script soon...unless I've read all that's posted there, which is a possibility. Looking forward to FS updates, as always. |
| misc 2005-01-05 ch 21, anon. | abusethis was an interesting fic, well written and is in the relams of possibiltiy and i enjoyed it! T There is a song called 'always' by saliva... you should listen to it, it suits this fic perfectly |
| DeppDRACOmaniac 2004-12-15 ch 21, | abuseGreat Job! Your amazing! May it always be that way. Good luck on your Secret Window fic! |
| Euterpe 2004-12-04 ch 21, anon. | abuseDios mío! (and that's something, comming from an atheist). I've just spent two days reading your OUTM fics (both of them) and I'm very much impressed. It's been a long, long time since I've been so drawn to a fic, specially one who's female lead I can't really identify myself with - I mean, lets face it - Tess was really driving me crazy with her actions sometimes! (And that was probably the general idea...) But you managed to keep it interesting, unpredictable, tense, intriguing and beyond up to the very end. I'm most certainly looking forward on reading more of your stuff! Euterpe P.S. Did I mention I loved Tess' 'Voice'? Those comments were really adding to the story. |
| Midnight 2004-10-26 ch 21, anon. | abuseThe last few days of my life have been dominated by your writing. I started with Fractured Secrets followed by More Than Eyes and finally More Than Life. I'll save Post Script until after I've seem the movie it was based on. You have a good writing style and your stories stay true to the characters created in the movies. This helps make the characters very believable. I will be keeping an eye out for any future works from you and if you ever write and publish anything, I'll definately be buying it! |
| zigzag 2004-10-22 ch 21, | abuseHere's something strange- I actually read the entire 49 chapters (so far) of MTD before I started this, along with Merrie's 'Darkness Rising' but I haven't read 'More than Eyes' yet... strange order I know but I was too busy obbsessing over the brillience of what I was reading to notice. I left a rather passionate review for MTD on aff and I'm hoping to do the same here... I cried!- If that isn't a compliment I don't know what is, the amount of times I've been close to tearing my hair out in both this story and MTD- too many to count! SJ Sands has to be one of the greatest characters that ever existed (that includes Jeffrey in MTD)...along with both Tess and Salida. It's gonna be horrible when I've run out of things to read related to them. I am what can only be described as a fanfiction junkie and out of the hundereds of amazing stories I must have read, I can honestly say that these have been the best writen as well as the most compelling and entertaining. I don't know any bigger compliment I can give you so I'll stop ranting. I'm off to read your other stories now! Thanks for such an amazing story xx ZOE xx |
| Lynx Ryder 2004-09-30 ch 21, | abuseOh my, it's all over! That was wonderful. I'm so glad their together and you didn't make it all mushy because their relationship is far from conventional, hell, it's barely even loving in the vaguest sense of the word. I have really enjoyed reading these two fics, so much so that it's now half one in the morning and if I don't go to bed soon I will collapse at my desk. I think you are a fantastic writer and I cannot wait to read more of your work (oh, and very excited about the prospect of a Neon Daisies POTC fic :D) Thank you for taking so much time and effort to produce such an amazing story, this is one reader who is very appreciative. *hugs* Good night! :) |
| Lynx Ryder 2004-09-30 ch 20, | abuseSo he did leave her, in a hospital, alone, when he knew she was safe...just like she did to him. *shakes head* why can't everyone just be happy? I know, I know, because that's not real life... "You wanted me to hate you? I'll tell you what will do the trick. Just leave."--oh! please don't leave! I swear to god Sands if you don't come back I'll fricking kill ya! :D! Only the prologue to go... :( |
| Lynx Ryder 2004-09-30 ch 19, | abuse"I don't want to die alone. I'm so scared. Don't leave me."--Hold on Tess! Please hold on! He promised to apologise...holy frick! Carlos is dead! *dances* His death was really good. After all that stuff about Tess not being able to kill and then she finally managed it, so unexpected! Hurry helicopter, hurry! |
| Lynx Ryder 2004-09-30 ch 18, | abuse"As Sands was thrown forward by the force, he was very glad that Tess had insisted on the seatbelt."--hahaha...see women do know best. OMG! I have a car crash in my OUTIM fic too...but I didn't end it on an evil cliffie like this...so glad the next chapter is just a click away. |
| Lynx Ryder 2004-09-30 ch 17, | abuseOh no...don't let Sands be caught...don't let Tess be hurt... ok, so both of those wishes were blown to pieces. "The same "good ol' Uncle Sam" who'd better be paying for my ** funeral. And not some cheap cremation either."-Sands! don't joke about things like that! It's just not funny. *feels very tense* "And for someone who wasn't quite a real person yet, he was okay."--what a lovely way to say he cares for Marcos Hahahah..."Does she love you?" "No." "What about you?" Oh, let me assure you, I love myself a great deal." *laughs loudly and then is quiet so as not to wake the rest of the household up* :D! No, no, no! Carlos you evil b-! Please don't make Tess hurt Sands...she wouldn't be able to take it. At least Tess knows Sands didn't cheat on her now...small consulation though it is at this time. Ek, how dare you make me feel so tense?! You're such a damn good writer...I just can't guess which way this story is going to turn Oh, and don't let Sands be dead or I'll quite possibly never review again (we both know that's a lie :D!) |