Awesome story i hope you make another! was it sydney who said that?

Is it just me, or am I supposed to be getting shivering notions that this is Sark's ghosts of past, present, and future? Because if so... I suppose I can hardly wait for the third installment then!
Beyond my theorizing, I'll tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed this angsty dark piece just as much as I did the first installment. This one was more mental, more personal, more angsty because you can see his perilous grip on the present slipping away. You have a wonderful way with words and realism.

OMG this is so sad. I feel for Sark. Sucks when it can get worse! Poor guy!

o, more more more! :)very good.