 Sarimia 2007-09-08 . chapter 2dun dun dun. Sorry, I just thought the ending there needed a little theme music^_^! Anyways, are you going to update any time this year? Please?
Sarii^_^ |
 VedGirl1201 2004-06-22 . chapter 2I love it!! Please please PLEASE WRITE MORE!! I will buy you 5 cookies if you do! |
 Kirjava Deamon 2004-02-12 . chapter 2/ni the dimly lit room all by herself/
It's "in".
/brows ni a hilarious manner/
"In" again.
I really do think this is one of the six or so gems of the muck; the only Girl-in-CGL other than five or so that I find having a perpous other than the author having the Dtenter of their choice. You've given Candy a personality and some physical falts; bad teeth, looking like a little girl, understandable carelessness, not overdone physical discription.
Please DON'T make her behave with the Dtenters in a OOC way. Making them OOC (out of charator). |
 Nosilla 2004-02-12 . chapter 2MORE! U-MUST TYPE-MORE!
I liked it.
UPDATE PLZ!!1 |
 Nosilla 2004-02-11 . chapter 1 hm... intersting...
UPDATE DARN U! |
 ZiggyGurl 2004-02-11 . chapter 1*hops up and down* Ya know how when you get a really good idea you get really excited? Well, I don't have an idea...but i'm excited about your story! YAY! Good work! |
 stuckonnadaaaa 2004-02-08 . chapter 1 you need to ad cause i really want you to k? thanx. and the story is a bit funcusing i mean confusing sorry about that.gtg bye now |
 drowchild/founapeanut 2004-02-05 . chapter 1 Looks cool, although the story idea of a girl at Camp Green Lake is definately overused--and I've read, like, one that's not a Mary-Sue.
--hands you Mary-Sues/Harry-Stue spray--
Keep it up. |