i LOVE your work so far! i've just started reading this storyand I'm on chapter 3. i'm still wondering: their names are obviously japanese but i don'tunderstand where this takes place? can you let me know please? thanks so much and this is great!

wow
meiling is seriously like a **
man learn to back girl!

Ur a really god..,Oops.. ohh well kept it

Ur a really god..er..like...writer??

haha
no seriosuly

man i was like reading another fanfic
while reading urs
and like the other fanfic was soo boring...
sigh

urban decay is a make-up line.

Wow! This has been one crazy ride. Great and interesting story line. Please update soon

I REALLY REALLY REALLY like this story! I hope u update soon.

--Cheza

this is a really good story. i wonder what more there is to why Sakura's there...continue soon please!

thats really good, got nothing more to say but update as soon as you can. peace, love and happines! love Tayla.

Aww, I'll prolly be the only one to say this but I really feel sorry for Meiling... I mean for all the worth of his "brotherly love" for her that he so proclaims, there was never even ONE scene that showed that. At all. So honestly, it was suppose to be a sad moment when it happened, but meh... really didn't feel a difference... XD

Sakura is such a mystery... getting kinda suspicious about her true intent... if this had been an original story I would've thought Sakura to be either:
A. some hooker after his money
B. somebody someone hired to break Syao's bastard attitude
C. just somebody ** off at Syao and wanna change him... aka when he does change she will leave him.

But since it is a CCS fanfic, I know they will be together. :3 Saku is pretty damn straight forward though.. XD

and gotta LOVE Eriol!

Lol this story is hilarious. It's funny watching all those ** fights... though unfortunately, gotta say, Sakura is dragging down the humour a bit... I mean it's great watching her reaction and responses when she's around everyone else who's all "popular" and all, but by herself... gawd, her life is so boring. XD;;

Meiling on the other hand, **, heck yeah, but damn fun to read about. XD

anyhow, keep writing, I'm just dropping a review now to let you know you've got another reader. will continue reading now.

-MS

PS--this story kinda reminds me of Cruel Intention / Mean Girls mixed together. =P

They were now eye to eye. Sakura smiled at him. “Don’t worry about me. I’m a tough cookie. But don’t…DON”T ever walk in my bathroom when I’m showering. In all honesty, it’s annoying as hell.”

...that line was very OOC of Sakura, who you've been portraying as sweet, innocent, and lovely this whole story. But that being said, I just wanted to let you know that threw me off a lot because this is such an incredible and cleverly written fanfiction, it felt weird having that rough talk come out of Sakura's mouth.

You are gifted with the skill of writing romance like it's magic yet still realistic, and I really admire that quality in an author. So good luck&hopefully you go far in your writing (that is, if you decide to want to publish any of your work). :)

well here you are, you have asked for it. i am going to go thru every chapter of this fanfic and tell you what is wrong with the whole thing. all of the characters are stock characters (i.e. flat characters). your grammar is very bad here as well. and what is really good with the random incest? meiling is related to syoran but is in love with him? are these the hills of south carolina? you don't describe enough. what does the nokia phone look like? saying its a nokia phone is not enough. theres a million kinds of nokia phones.

you'll have fun with this, 16 more chapters to go.

i will say that i think that there are no redeeming factors to this story.

Wow...



This is horrible. Or worse, to the point of how I don't see how the hell this story has 509 reviews.(I had to click, on the review button to re-check it.I had to make sure my eye sight wasn't going bad.)
I was thinking that most are probably under the age of eleven or so. And I tried my best to actually see the point of where this was going, but I just didn't.
Do you know when you write a fanfiction, you need to dig deep down into your imagination and squeese it till there's this perfect chapter that everyone will love and come back for?
Okay, here's this story which I'm sure is your baby, so instead of over characterizig Meiling, making Syaoran this fake cool guy and Sakura this tree hugging hippie, Tomoyo a submissive dog;give them CHARACTER.Try basing some of the characters on friends I'm pretty sure one or two are the cool/angry type or a 'save the Earth' type.

oh esperaba q esto continuara!! pense q era un fic terminado.. :P
ops! i'm sorry. i forgot to write in english.. I was saying that i thougth this fic was ended.. but it isnt!

bua!
anws... love your fic girl! at the beggining i thouthg sakura was an angel.. but obviously she is not.. so.. what exactly is she?!

hope u answer that soon

c'ya!

wow . meiling a real biatch . AWESOME ! haha , i wonder what she found out .. Sakura and Syaoran are so cute :) i really hope to read more soon !

Wow! this is nice!