This is probably my favorite of your fics, though I generally like your work.

I'm guessing this is permanently on hiatus until The Return is finished, but I'd like to see more. It has one of the most unique methods of getting Ranma in a fuku that I've seen, and I'd really like to see how you deal with the seemingly inevitable merger of Ranma/Ranko.

I can imagine them trading off on picking things they get to keep, with Ranma's top priority being the Art, Ranko's being female, Ranma's being attracted to women, etc. At any rate, I'd like to see the resolution to this, you've left it off at a great spot, in that it really makes me want to read more of it.

VERY enjoyable plot. I can't wait for the next update!

PLEASE continue this! I really like this story, and I want to see it concluded.

Also, The Return kicks major **. Great job! It's epic.

~M~

I know its been 4 years since an update, but damnit come on I got hooked on this. Great story, love the whole idea about brainwashing/mind control. The only thing I have against this story is that 'Ranko' was much too girlish, but I guess you were trying to prove a point by contrasting both Ranma and Ranko.

These are great. Please make a third one.

interesting story, and it seems it was just a phase, but still, it was *creepy*.

I don't like this kind of mind ocntrol/brainwashing, and i still maintain that it *should* have been the real warning.

especially as it seems that it take the whoel fic.

Or as far as it is posted.

Shudder..

First, i know it would have been a spoiler, but if you have a warning for sailor ranko, or even Ranma pretending to be ranko, you shouldn't say it like that: the fic was actually brainwashing, which is very different.

In fact, it's the second fic of yours that have brainwashed!Ranma, if we count the fairy one :/

hope this is just a phase of the fic.

*puppy dog eyes*

More please?

When I started reading, I was expecting a one-shot. Ranma gets brainwashed, Ranma gets unbrainwashed, Ranma gets **, Ranma offs Pluto, the future is better than the brainwashed world that Pluto wanted and we all lived happily ever after. I'm liking this story immensely. Darn you and your Ranma-talent. XD

Till next time, then, young Temple. ^_^V

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great job wen next chapter

Yay...two reviews within 24 hours :P

Just rereading this fic. I never made it past the first chapter before now. I find it interesting that so many authors who do the whole Ranma becomes a girl schtick write like young girls...frilly and pink dominating the text. When I got to your second chapter, I was glad to see that it was more reserved. Women don't generally go for frilly and pink...thank goodness ^^

Now that I've read chapter two, I hope that you to end up continuing this. It looks like it could be interesting.

Outstanding story! I hope you come back to finish it soon. Thanks for an enjoyable read!

poor, poor ranma.

This is a great story! Poor Ranma (and Ranko). I hope to see more of it soon! :P

Excellent story. Definitely not your usual "Sailor Ranko" fic. This story still has great potential and I hope that you'll continue writing it. I always love a good Setsuna bashing. Hope you'll update this.

This story needs to be continued. Pluto must pay! And a little Ranko/Usagi action would be nice.

It's a very well written and compelling story. I really want to see what the merged Ranma/Ranko is like.