Reviews for To Have and Hold

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Youka-Chan 2008-07-11 ch 31,	abuseHave I ever told you, this is the best angst story I have ever read? I read this and felt the pain harry was going through, I almost cried half the time. This is a amazingly well written story, and I thank you for writing it!
HPparasiempre 2008-06-28 ch 29,	abuseBonjour. je suis désolé, pardonnez s'il vous plaît pour mon anglais, mais, erm... You have most likely heard this before but there is a mistake that has been ennuyeux moi. Do not worry it is quite petite but ... '"Vernon," called Draco with a decisive tap of his wand on the wall, "Vernon, R."' Correct me if I am incorrect but should that not say: "Dursley," called Draco with a decisive tap of his wand on the wall, "Vernon, L." ? Because je crois que vous avez dit in a previous chapter that Vernon's prénom deuxième was 'Lewis'... and there could be more than one "Vernon, R." in teh world so he must need to speak Vernon's Last name, non ? merci pour votre temps. Emi. x
SeverusPotterSnape 2008-06-19 ch 2,	abusethis story would be better if the sentences weren't all smudge up together but separated so it's easier to read, like: 1) the boy said, "Hello." 2) The girl replied with a hello and a smile. Err, something like that. So yea... but all-in-all, it's a pretty good story so far but kinda hard to read for me... Plus, when r u going 2 update? it's been like, 3 years you know!
splodge 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abuseI'm positive I've seen an updated version of this somewhere. I thought it was on LJ but couldn't see it on your account. If you are still reading these reviews could you send me the correct link please. I enjoyed this the first time through but would love to see what you do with it now you've had the chance to "improve" it.
1derland pixie 2008-03-14 ch 31,	abusenice story!
Owlian 2008-02-02 ch 30, anon.	abuseAlso, a Britpick. Until very recently (and long after HP would be in his 20s) in the UK pubs (not bars) were under Licencing Law and as such would not have been open at 11am.
Owlian 2008-02-02 ch 27, anon.	abuseLook, luv, I really like this story. I think it's really nicely done and has some stunning imagery, and the plot moves at a very nice pace but if you ever look back on this fic and think to re-publish it I seriously BEG you to get a BETA, because your spelling isn't very good and you're proof-reading is equally awkward. In this chapter alone you've changed someone's name from 'Roger Thomas' to 'Rogers' even though the lines follow on from each other. Similarly, it's 'hoping' not 'hopping', 'altar' not 'alter', 'pursed' not 'persed', 'Hawaii' not 'Hawii'...you get the idea. It just frustrates me because this is such a marvellous fic but the bad spelling can be really off-putting to a reader and makes the fic read less smoothly than it should.
Seriously 2008-02-02 ch 4, anon.	abuseSeriously though...this is meant to be a chapter? Is there a loading failure? I can only see 5 lines of text :S
Sinfully Addicted 2008-01-27 ch 31,	abuseThis was a great story. I loved the storyline. Hope all is well with you. Take care and Blessed Be. P.S. Thanks for the read.
Rin Hitokiri 2008-01-21 ch 31,	abusewhat was important to dumbledor's plan...or was that from another story i was reading?
Istalindir 2007-12-25 ch 1, anon.	abuse=3 First I must say this is a very creative way of bringing the two together. It's a good tale. D: But I need to get something off my chest.. Why is it that no one objects? If some senile idiot told me a HAT was going to choose my 'partner' I would flip.. :x They would have to drag me to the hat kicking and screaming.. or I'd choose to be expelled.. So.. I'm just wondering why no one does this..? Are they all just sheep or something..? D: Or at the very least why doesn't anyone lie and say the hat choose no one if they didn't like the choice? Not really importan.. I just wanted to know. XP Cause I was bothering me.. =3 I'm not trying to complain.. I do like the story.. This is really just for me. X3 I'm weird like that sometimes.
swordbunny4486 2007-11-26 ch 31,	abusecool.
AJ 2007-11-01 ch 31, anon.	abuseI've read the story and I must say it is wonderful if not a bit tedious at times. The only thing that I would suggest is fixing the format of the first few chapters as that can sometimes put people off of a story if it is not formatted correctly. I truly love the way the story is written though I do believe that the ratings have gone up so you can put a little more SEX into the actual story. It would improve it tenfold and you would get many more reviews. I'm sorry if I have offended you in any way. I'm not flaming...I'm giving constructive criticism.
SSnapeLuver 2007-09-01 ch 13,	abusegreat story but how do i get the deleted scenes i went looking for those groups you posted its been a few years since you wrote this and those groups aren't there anymore cound you email me the story with all the scenes or an active link to a place they are posted please. hope you still read these
amy hobbes 2007-08-28 ch 7, anon.	abuseand that is why u have amazingly obseessed readers ;P love ALL your stuff!

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