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bookworm2011
2008-06-21 . chapter 5
Great job. I am really enjoying it so far.
Handmaiden of Foamy
2004-12-09 . chapter 4
something is messed up with your next chapter or my computer but i love it!
Nymredil72
2004-08-03 . chapter 4
Tehe. This is hilarious! I absolutely love it! Especially when Michele called up the police and they thought it was a joke... LOL! Your writing is very good, and sounds just like a normal girl Michele's age... the opening to this chapter was a perfect example of this. It reminds me very much of myself whenever I wake up in the morning... I still think that I have to get up and go to school whenever I awaken... even though I've been on vacation for more than a month! Please try to update quickly, I don't think I can bear waiting for another chapter for so long!
ElegantArrow 64
2004-08-01 . chapter 4
LOL!! That was good! Im really liking this so far. Shes so clueless though its starting to annoy me. Well, Please up date soon!!
ElegantArrow 64
2004-08-01 . chapter 3
All i have to say is LUCKY! Shes LUCKY!! but she doesnt know it. What till Elanor Finds out. I wish that could happen to me. But dont we all?
Reading on..
ElegantArrow 64
2004-08-01 . chapter 2
I have always wanted to do a film thing like that. But bad news for me, is that i look like an extremly tall hobbit. No elf. lol.
read on...
ElegantArrow 64
2004-08-01 . chapter 1
Augh..how many times I have herd that speech and it drives me crazy! i want to marry Frodo too!! and my parents love lord of the rings as much as i do. Thats why we have a picturem of Frodo in our garage. LOL (Dont ask.) Anyway, Ill read more. I like this. want to see what happens.
Nymredil72
2004-05-03 . chapter 3
*Are* you going to update? *pouts* I really like this fic... please?
Cabbeh
2004-02-13 . chapter 3
LOL, very good! Very good! Yet another cliffie! =D
Nymredil72
2004-02-12 . chapter 3
M... quite good, surprisingly. I usually loathe anything which involves original chararacters... but this was done amazingly well. Michelle doesn't seem like a Mary Sue at all, and her friends are very believable as well. I also like the fact that it is narrorated by someone who hates LotR, something which is rarely done. Just one question: Elanor is 8? That is quite young to have read the books... then again, prehaps she has only seen the movies, judging by her comment that her friend had said that Frodo was eaten by a giant spider. Your characterizations of Frodo and Sam are also exceptional. I find that in most of the time OCs are central figures in the plot, the real characters are lost in the backround or they turn very OOC. You have definately done a good job of avoiding this. And your plot is very captivating... I can't wait 'til the next chapter. I wish something like what is happening to Michelle would occur in the lives of some of my LotR-hating friends.
Update Soon!
~*Nymredil*~
Cabbeh
2004-02-11 . chapter 2
Wow, this is wonderful - wo, cliffhangers o.0 Heh. Anyways, add another chapter as soon as possible!
iluvglorfindel
2004-02-09 . chapter 2
Great chapter! Love the Crocidile Hunter idea.
Cabbeh
2004-02-06 . chapter 1
This is very good so far, I'm loving it! Hehe, the frightening thing is Elanor reminds me of ME when I go into one of my LotR-obsessive moods...eh, well. LOL!
Keep up the great work, I love the way you make Ellie speak so naturally and not have the words always flowing properly, as they wouldn't in RL. This is awesome! =D
= C a b b y =
Senko Caradosa
2004-02-05 . chapter 1
Hehe! Spiffy. There's good spelling and grammar, and I would like this story for that reason alone, but you've also got what may very well become an intriguing plot. ;) The part about Elanor and her friend wanting to marry so and so made me laugh out loud.
iluvglorfindel
2004-02-05 . chapter 1
Add more soon!
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