Merrin 2004-02-29 . chapter 1Hey! I discovered you had written spike's side of the story; sorry it took me so long to r & r. These two make great companion pieces. I really, really like your use of musical terms: dissonance, resolution, etc. They convey the emotional states of the characters very well. The sequence at the end, when Spike's grief finally breaks open, is quite lovely. I really feel his grief, and her comforting presence. |
Isabel 2004-02-11 . chapter 1 Beautiful. Very touching. I was worried at first that it was gonna be S/T cause I really don't like that (you kow me... extrem B/S shipper lol) but Tara and Spike friendship is a really good thing. With one short little piece of fanfic, you made me appreciate Tara more. I love all the emotions you put into your writing. I think you're really good with words and should write more. If you do, I'm looking forward to it. |