great story

well that was pretty much BRILLIANT

aw, so cute! and clever twisted ending.

loved it to bits

toodles, Jess x

Loved it, how adorable. I think this could totally happen and it would be so cute! Good job

Haha, classic! Just the kind of fluff to brighten my otherwise hum-drum day. Lovely. :)

That was great. I loved the twist at the end. I completely didn't expect it.

Wonderful story. Your dialogue was right on and you nailed the Donna and Josh to a T. I enjoyed it so much, I read it twice straight through.

"I don't know what it was, but I'm sorry and tell me how to fix it,"
My, does Donna have Josh well trained or what?
I've never laughed so hard over any TWW fanfiction. I really like this.

Cute! You had me going there...I thought it was going to be Amy. You go, Donna! :-)
Very cute.

DAMN WAS THAT GOOD! I REALLY needed that after a long graveyard shift that wouldn't end. Loved the twist at the end...put a HUGE ASS smile on my face. Great read, great story. Thanks. :D

Bravissimo! Here's to Josh's swagger and what put it there.
Would that TPTB would see reason...

This is absolutely hilarious! Very astute observations of both J's and D's body language and speech patterns... and I laughed my own personal you-know-what off. Thanks! :-)

Oh hahahhahaahaha. I liked that, very clever. i did not see that coming

I love it! It's so cute. The truth doesn't come out until the end, which makes it all the better.

I like it. Very sweet.