Wow, it's been over a year since this story wuz updated... I just found it again when I wuz going thru old reviews that I posted and I realized I never reviewed this last chapter. So, here's my review and my plead that u will start 2 update this again as it really is a good story! Poor Bram, he's so sad, and he has a daughter that's prolly sad 2 cuz her dad's not around. I wanna know what happens w/ this! Are u ever gonna update it again?

Ooh, New York, eh? Interesting...

And yay for the introduction of Amy!

Haha I'm sorry for all this random-ish mentions, I'm just not too sure what to say, actually. ) But I DO want to read more soon!

Oho... that was dangerous. What if Will walked in? Will would throw him overboard regardless of whether it was Bram's ship or not.

Another good chapter. The incredibly long wait, as u say, was well worth it. Can't wait 4 more!

Is this going 2 be updated soon? I can't wait 2 read more of it! It's really good! Keep up the good work!

Please check the number after the Skies so that you don't confuse us.

First of all excuse me for writing a review/attack-on-my-alter-ego.

The review:

I liked your story though there are some syntax errors you might want to check out. As far as storyline goes the pacing is not consistent, but that I don\t mean that it doesn't work. It does. It's kind of reminiscent of the Bronte style of writing. (Sorry, I can't think of any more good writers at the moment.) Keep it up.

(Liam's a laugh by the way.)

for Cloudy-sperm:

Hi, how are you! You don't care anymore they say. But you typed a lot of stuff here for someone who wants to end the fued (feud). (Ladies and Gents. What a moron!) I wonder are you still writing all your crappy pieces of shit? I'm sure you are!

Well, Merry Christmas then! Hope that the baby Christ reads your work and gives you some divine vomit.

Ciao.

I'm not going to erase your review because it wasn't ugly, it was stupid.

I'm not stupid, you are mistressKC. If you don't know why I came to this conclusion, then reread the comments from you on BYLT's blogger page.

I said that you worshiped him because of the way you begged for him to read your story and critique it. I know you're just going to say that you wanted a good writer to critque your story because you don't mind a little criticism, but have some decency will you.

I was going to say that maybe 'attacking' wasn't the best word to use, but then I reread your first review and I think it was perfect.

I don't want any trouble alright, I just wish that you and everybody else would see that what both myself AND BYLT did was wrong and I'm sorry for it. Apparently he does not wish to stop it. So be it. I DON'T CARE ANYMORE.

I removed the review when I thought it was from BYLT, because he sent me forty-two annonymous reviews that came at me personally and had nothing to do with my story. I didn't want that sort of crap on my review page. Sorry it you don't agree.

As far as 'Deadly Love' is concerned. I wrote that when all I had was a crappy computer that didn't have spelling or grammar check. I, like most others, am not the best when it comes to that and would prefer to have a little help. I don't like that fic anymore, but there are a few that do. Because of this, I'm not removing it. If I do, however, it would only be so that I could fix somethings, but I would repost it. I don't care about it enough at this point to waste my time doing so.

I'm not trying to piss you off or anything, but I'm going through a lot right now and I don't need anymore head aches. I don't mind your reviews and the manner in which you speak to me doesn't bother me either. If you wish to continue speaking with me, you may do so.

Signed,

Yes yes this is good.

Ok look, I've had enough of BYLT and all of his/her crap. I don't need you attacking me too. I'm the one who tried to stop the fued and he/she is the one who refused to end it. I may have erased the review from you, but I wouldn't have if it wasn't for the fact that I assumed that it was BYLT. I'm sorry for the missunderstanding.

I don't want anymore crap from anyone so if you wish to defend the all powerful BYLT, do it on your own review page, not mine.

As for placing God on my profile, my religious situation is none of your concern.

I don't care what people think about me. If I did care, than my profile would have been shorter, as to hide who I am and not give people the oppertunity to criticize me.

I like getting constructive criticism, it helps to improve my writing, but as I've said a thousand times, don't be rude about it.

You may worship BYLT with every ounce of your being, but I don't. He/she/it, whatever, spent more time sending insults at me than he/she did at my story.

I'm sorry if you believe that forty-two annoymous reviews from the same person and attacks at me by e-mail are good for my learning process, but I don't.

Continue to kiss BYLT's feet if you wish, but don't think, for even a moment, that I plan to do the same.

If you plan to be a baby and run to BYLT because I commented to you, so be it. I don't care anymore.

Signed,

Yes yes this is good. (I know I left the comma out, but I generally just do now because I like to hear the complaints.)

I really like this story so far. Can't wait 2 see what the Commodor says 2 Bram not telling him his last name. I like the story Bram made about Elizabeth, and u did a pretty good job with how she reacted 2 it. Can't wait 4 more!

LOL! I really like this story! I'm really looking 4ward 2 more! I hope u update soon!

Wow. This reminds me of Gilbert & Sullivan's 'Pirates of Penzance'. Pirates who act nothing like pirates at all. But it's good and different. I like different. :)

-miss kitty

Keep up the good work...nice story so far

great to see u back in action! )

Oh, it is so good to see another chapter. This is very funny. I dont know whom to feel the more sorry for, Norry or Bram. I love how he has the entire ship regimented and trained to adopt the 'acting'mode on an instant's notice. What in the world must it have been like growing up around both Bram and Jack. How is it that Bram didnt just self-destruct from frustration. You bring logic to a pirate fic. incredibly funny.

hey great story. keep it up. update next chapter soon.