Aw, what a great ending! This was really a cool story, you got into Logan's head really well, I'm gonna definately have to check out your other stories!

I liked this story as well, seeing them meeting eachother in another way. I would've liked to know, however, what it was that made Max come tp Logan, what was her descision?
Great again gurl :)

I think this is one of my favorite missing scenes, for lack of a better word, from "Pilot." You've explained much that wasn't on the show, making Logan's adjustment to life with the wheelchair realistic and beautiful. You've the characters in-character, to be sure, and that is appreciated. I like Max and Bling's first meeting, the possible introduction of Bling to Logan's "Eyes Only" work, and, of course, the optimism of the last paragraph. The story is a wonderful look into Logan's character, and an excellent foreshadowing of the future.
Thanks for sharing!

A good attempt, but lacking the depth of the chapters from the Cale Diaries or Resurgam by Rachel Wilder which can be found here:rachelwilder.freeservers.com. Still, I enjoyed the story. I always enjoy delving into Logan's psyche in this way.

great fic

ok you either need to write more in this story or make a sequel because i really liked that last chapter. keep up the awesome work!

Hey,
Very interesting story. Please keep going.
thanks for posting.

Oh yeah! Very very nice. Thank you.

Oh! Now Max is in the picture hey? Could get interesting...

This story is very good. I love m/l stories. I hope that you will write a sequel to this story. I like the way you write. the storyline moves on nicely and you don't have grammar or spelling mistakes. (I might not see them all because english is not my first language)

Nicely written. I liked Bling's comment that Logan drove him crazy. lol.
I think you showed a good understanding of some of the issues Logan was facing. Well done.

i really like this so far, i eagerly await the next chapter. keep up the great work!

What do you mean only one more chapter. You wouldn't end it when Max walks in the door. You must go on.. Don't leave us - your fans and readers - with one more chapter.
You story is the little gem in the cat litter box.

hey- its me - i never thought i would say this- but i really enjoy reading this other side of Logan - the one you never got to see in the show - i believe a person can have many sorts of different personalities, and the show only showed 1 or 2 - so keep it up !- OD

I thought you hit on quite a few truths in this one - Logan essentially having to work through it himself, and the idea that regardless of what happened, the world outside goes on the same - which I'm not sure is a comfort when you feel like your own world is falling apart. I liked the way you wrote Bennett, and his discomfort. I guess I still feel Logan would be more guarded in speaking to Bennett, but possibly slowly, more open with Bling. Still, I'm enjoying this, and looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks :)