please finish this, it's one of the best story's I have read so far

Update?
Brilliant job and sorry I couldn't write a longer review! Must Leave great ob
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It reminds of that song that goes "I can only imagine!"
I would imagine if this fic were good, what would it look like?

Wow, good job! This is a fantastic story. You decribe everything with amazing detail! And the plot is awesome! Keep up the VERY good work, can't wait to read more of this. -Khita

Wow. Very cool plot line. I love how you thought it all out. ^_^ Of course, this is the first chobits fanfic I've read, so I wouldn't know anything about plotlines in this section. Um...I would recommend on those really big paragraphs, you know, to make them a little bit smaller. It's a little hard to follow, as it IS a computer screen. Anyway, I enjoyed it! Update soon!
Ciao!
~Merayna

Very nicely done so far- I'm surprised, however, that Hideki has seemed to adjust to this new form so easily... Hm. Maybe a little bit more confusion on his part? (after all, this is HIDEKI we're talking about) Overall, nice job so far.

OOH... this looks promising. However, it will be interesting to see whether the 'Hideki' is the same one in soul as the former, or if it's merely a copy of the original. Interesting idea.

Good story! Keep updating please

Good story so far, but Chi's real name is Elda.