I don't know how to explain but...
I think this story is great! I like how you make vash react knowing is real nature.And knives...I think is well in character. but I don't understand well why Rem don't allow the twin to see the plants again,after the death of their real mother...mah!
by the way, good work!
now,I'm going to read the other 2 part of this story! ^_^

I really like this story. It makes sense to me that this would have happened on the ship. Now there is a reason behind Knives' apparent hatred of Rem as well as humans in general.

Ricki! ::wavity wave::
Finally I get off my durn keister to review the fic. But you know I like all your stuff, right?
This story's tight and compact and very entertaining. You do child Vash and Knives very well; I especially like how you made that gradual shift in Knives's personality in the middle. Soon he shall become the full-blown psycho we all know and either want to kill or love to the point of servitude. ;p
Also, this fic also helps explain to me what the heck Plants are exactly and what they really DO; I knew they were used as energy resources, but I never understood them that much. This helps a bunch.
Great job, Ricki!

Wow! A fantastic, insightful story. You've managed to fill in the blanks about the twins' time on the SEEDS ship in a way that is realistic and doesn't contradict the manga. And your writing style is so enjoyable, too!
Keep up the good work.