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| Mikau102389 2006-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent story!! I wish you could make more stories! I'm adding you and your story to my fav list. |
| Real-fan05 2005-07-16 ch 1, | abusePoor Paine. She always is struggling with her emotions. Always. |
| Mistress of Muses 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abusePoor Paine, yet a nice fic. I'll go read the companion piece now... |
| MadHattess 2004-09-15 ch 1, | abuseVery well written and of course about one of the world's cutest couples. Believable dialogue (harder to find than it should be) and engaging descriptions. I've said this before as I read this first a while ago. I suppose after I told Dreav I'd reviewed *one* of your fics I felt a bit guilty... |
| dragonflygirl10 2004-05-08 ch 1, | abuseoh happy day with the yay and the... cheating... aw who cares anyway? very cute little fic. ^_^ I must read on... |
| Millyardo13 [Stephen Hansen... 2004-05-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLike the story, but it ended way too quickly and didn't have any plot. I could have done better, and I'm not even as good as you yet. Oh,well, keep writing. |
| Rain54 2004-04-08 ch 1, | abuseSo sweet.Rikku really teases Paine and somehow the end's a bit cliffhanger... but it's just so sweet nontheless. I like how you describe Paine's angst and feelings. Good job =) |
| Iseki 2004-03-22 ch 1, | abuseE.. kissy face! I love the way you put Paine's thoughts into words. I love all the "poetic crap" you do some poetry don't you? *shifty eyes* if not, then maybe you should! ^-^ but is Rikku...playing Paine? I dunno.. maybe I missed something, I kinda rushed through this one, I do that when they're good! And I'm hyper right now... so I'm gonna cut this short. Ciao! ~Iseki |
| SmilodonFatalis4@aol.com 2004-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWoot, I really liked that ^_^ short and sweet...kinda...^_^. Keep up the good work. |
| FantasyTrepie14 2004-02-20 ch 1, | abuseAh, that was so wonderful. *Squeals all delightedly* I've got to go read the others now... ^_^ |