Aww. I'm gonna cry!

I loved it. Really sensitive. Liked the final sentence - saving the soul...
You should write more stories

Woo! Another great story!
I'm not sure if it's just my computer that does this, but chapter 1 and 2 are the same. Strange.
That was sad, and dealt in everything; Pain, Love, breakups, death.
I don't usually read Scott/Ororo stories, I can't see that pairing as clearly as Logan/Marie or Scott/Logan, but yours are always good.

hey, nice job with this one i liked it.
the final part i feel was a bit ruched it came shorter then it should be but all in all a nice fic

That was WONDERFUL! A beautiful, touching story of love, fear, pain, and sorrw; all feelings that you have portrayed so poignantly. You are an excellent writer!

SWEET! It's so..so...ah to heck with the words I love it!

hey its me once more twice as annoying and 3 times as charming.
ok side from me sassing nice writing as always short shorter then i would like but its ok, as for Shara i am asuming your meaning Marrow right ?
if i recall right she still one of the toughest chracters bitchy like style if that count for anything.