Aw... i'll have you know i cried during that movie. I don't cry during movies. so this one was really special. its one of my favorites, even though its so sad.

you did a wonderful job with the story. it could fit right in with the movie.

I loved this ending. It was great! David finally found people to love, and who would love him back. They loved him just the way he was, and wanted him to be with them forever. Great ending.
Thanks for a heart-warming story...

Ann

i love this movie and i actually had the same idea for a story as you...i really like yours. Its a lot like how i imagined mine. I am gonna modify my story so that its not too much like yours...i dont want ppl to think i copied you. In the meantime, I am gonna keep reading your story. Update soon!

Great story! Well written with realistic possibilities. I found the beginning a bit slow though, but it got alot better towards the end! Keep writing!

That was the best A.I. story I have ever read. Your a genious! I got all choked up on the happy ending. Thank you for posting this masterpiece.

Wow, great fic! I love the twists you put in; very daring, yet they work really well. It's interesting how David, a revolutionary Mecha who finally can love, can only love one person... it's a great conflict you put in there! Loved the ending too! hehe, it's great that he remains a child forever.

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i love this fic. the ending is sweet!

Ending was too rushed, greaet story up until that point, but I guess all good things must come to an end. I'd give your story an B, or 8/10

Hola!! me encanta lo que escribis!! por ahora solo he leido 2 historias pero las voy a leer a todas en cuanto pueda. Me gusta como unes las cosas para que quede algo entendible. Además, AMO A HALEY!:D, es mi actor favorito y un GRAN actor!! Bueno espero poder leer más de tus "Fictions".
BYe, suerte
*RoMi*

i thought the story was really awesome! it was so... realistic, and sad at times but it was still really good!. Please write more stories.
I'm sure they will be great!

~ breanna adams(yes that is my last name)
:) :D

A masterpiece at an infinite scale, Daniella. A a memorable fanfiction if I do say so myself. See, now why couldn't your story be in the movie? I still don't know why you only have little reviews, when you tell stories, they have the potential to drive readers into tears. As I read the last chapter of "Imprinting Conflict" I could've sworn I felt a tear running down my cheek. At the same time I heard that soundtrack from Bicentenial Man, "When you look at me" performed by Celine Dion, in my head. One day, you might find yourself publshing your own story. What a day that will be for you and to those you hold dear. Thanks for the invitation to your website! Keep writing!!

Hey! what's taking so long? I bet you're reading Peter Pan to get some ideas, huh? Remember the last review I gave u? I see you've made no. 1 in this fanfic. category! Congratulations! Keep writing! Your story has made my day.

This chapter has touched my heart(sniff). You have the makings of a pro, u knoow that? Monica's dead. Will Veronica keep David? If so that's great! I have an idea or two...let's say Veronica does keep him, you know that last chapter from J.M. Barrie's "Peter Pan" when Wendy grew up; Her children and their children's children went with Peter Pan to neverland. it became a family legacy after that. Make it the same with David when veronica's children and their children's children keep him as a member of the family. But as time goes by, the world would've been able to make mecha into orga literaly. May be then... well, I hope this helps! good luck and Keep writing

What joy...! I almost cried when I read this fic! I wish u could make a little more chapters.
Now why couldn't they make this into a movie? I was quite disappointed when I watched it. Then I thought of the possibilities of what could've been done to have david achieve his goals and I'm telling u, it's an endless list.Please keep writting! I'm a writer looking for some inspiration as well!