 pleasethank you 8/28/10 . chapter 9 why havent you updated in so so so long, please. please please please please please please please |
 SHINESPIRE 8/24/09 . chapter 9 MORE PLEASE! |
 harrylover101 7/14/09 . chapter 9hurry hurry hurry update really really soon!I LOVE IT! |
 foxy crimefighta 1/21/07 . chapter 9mm, this is good! are you ever going to update? xD;
also, i can't find the links to the uncut version.
did you take it down or something? D: |
 Frozentaho 12/14/06 . chapter 9 *sigh*. I know the chance of this story ever finishing is almost nil but I've grown to like it so much so I'll just beg. Please, for the love of RoyEd, update. Finish it. |
 Rokona 10/28/06 . chapter 9That was really great, poor Nina and Alexander and Edo.Please update really soon please, this is a great story! |
 Athina Dark-Angel of Death 6/14/06 . chapter 9I read this on a different sight the Touka Koukan sight and imediatly rushed here to see if your story existed here. Here I can leave a review, tell you how wonderful this is, and add it my favorties list so that i can constently check in for updates. I see that you have not updated for a long tiome so count this as a begging plea from the sorry person who always falls in love with the stories that become discontinued. PLEASE COMTINUE! |
 Miss Woodford 3/24/06 . chapter 9Found this mentioned over on livejournal. Powerful. I don't know exactly why, but I like it when people dare to go against the FMA canon. Still, I also hope he gets his brother back. |
 sadypsycho 1/18/06 . chapter 1Nice. |
 cheerful-pinkstar 10/24/05 . chapter 9It's sad. Update sooN! |
 Yersi Fanel 10/2/05 . chapter 9great story, too bad you have not update in so much time |
 CuriousDreamWeaver 8/31/05 . chapter 9Interesting fic. I thought the premise to it was very different and interesting. Please write more!
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CDW |
 Pheonyx Reborn 8/30/05 . chapter 4i'm sorry this would have been good but i was raped at the age of twelve and i just cant read this. my compliments on your writing skills. |
 twistedtitle 7/6/05 . chapter 9 question: have you read a book called kushiel's dart pr any books in that trilogy? cuz its awfully like you style of writing. just asking. anyways, update plz! |
 TaintedInk 6/29/05 . chapter 9GREAT STORY DUDE! LOVE IT! AWSOME! u get what i mean... |