nice story

I love Janeway and Naomi stories and this one is particularly good. It should of been made into an episode... The only thing that would make it better is if you expanded on each of their point of views...

Aww Naomi is a sweety

Great story! Chakotay and Janeway sure make good parents...

What else can I say, but adorable?

Really, a wonderful little story, I look forward to reading more of your work

very romantic and esactly how it should happen, write more stories soon

Awww, its so cute!

Loved it! I liked how you didn't explain the relationship until the end.

That was really good! It was really sweet and everyone was in character! youre really talented! write more!

this is so cute! I love it!

that was so sweet i loved it

That was one of the best Naomi stories that I've heard in a long time, someone actually figured out that Naomi is, does, and was having a problem meeting her biological father for the first time, the Captain helped to listen and understand her predicament and worries of meeting up to his soon to be expectations of her. As well the little innocence that the crew all know her to have, and love her for.

Woah, I love! It's sweet and romantic all at once!

That was a very unique, very touching story! It was beautifully written and I enjoyed reading it very much. Nice J/C, and a delightful journey into the relationship between Janeway and little Naomi. Well done!

All I can say is, Awwww! I love the line, "She's my Daddy!"